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Kisses Are Soft

. Guard you with my I will perform forever Mine kisses are soft though The strength in my right arm Matches the strength In mine left

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2009 2:01:00 PM

I like your command of words. Sara

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/5/2009 3:27:00 PM

Beautiful, amazing soft kisses... there is nothing better! Great write!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/4/2009 11:43:00 AM

Awesome! This sounds like someone is holding on tight. There is no escaping the fact of strong arms. Great job! ~Joseph

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2009 3:57:00 PM

this well penned poem goes to my favs--i love the contrast between the soft kisses and the strong arms and this man seems to provide safety"guard you with my life" and security--a real hero,all man,all that women love---beautiful,you re so talented --charma

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/24/2009 3:35:00 AM

Mine Right .. Mine Left-->The mine is much more stronger then my =)

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/23/2009 5:39:00 PM

To feel so safe in arms like those....a wonderful thing to be so loved. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/23/2009 5:28:00 PM

Love the idea of one who is sensitive and warm, but willing to fight to protect those he loves. Many images come to mind; Braveheart is one. Another is the scenario described in one of my favorite songs -- "Everything I Do" by Bryan Adams. I like a person who is strong enough to take this stance. Excellent poem, James! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/23/2009 5:18:00 PM

I love the second line in this piece..well done.