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Kisses Are Soft

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                Guard you with my 
                           I will 
                  perform forever

             Mine kisses are soft
                         though
      The strength in my right arm
            Matches the strength  
                     In mine left

true lovetrustspoken word

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Sara Kendrick

July 8, 2009 at 2:01 PM

I like your command of words. Sara

Ashley Yates

July 5, 2009 at 3:27 PM

Beautiful, amazing soft kisses... there is nothing better! Great write!

Joseph Spence Sr

July 4, 2009 at 11:43 AM

Awesome! This sounds like someone is holding on tight. There is no escaping the fact of strong arms. Great job! ~Joseph

Charmaine Chircop

June 24, 2009 at 3:57 PM

this well penned poem goes to my favs--i love the contrast between the soft kisses and the strong arms and this man seems to provide safety"guard you with my life" and security--a real hero,all man,all that women love---beautiful,you re so talented --charma

Sajdah Al-Riyami

June 24, 2009 at 3:35 AM

Mine Right .. Mine Left-->The mine is much more stronger then my =)

Carrie Richards

June 23, 2009 at 5:39 PM

To feel so safe in arms like those....a wonderful thing to be so loved. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

June 23, 2009 at 5:28 PM

Love the idea of one who is sensitive and warm, but willing to fight to protect those he loves. Many images come to mind; Braveheart is one. Another is the scenario described in one of my favorite songs -- "Everything I Do" by Bryan Adams. I like a person who is strong enough to take this stance. Excellent poem, James! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

June 23, 2009 at 5:18 PM

I love the second line in this piece..well done.

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