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Kissed With White Sage

My love grows as bouquets for you today you warm me a smile when hence you walk by I care for you in the right type of way you share your heart with me and I don't cry I hope this lasts forever and we gleam for that is what I hope to find from this a prospect of hope we indeed do deem a true story of peace and to find bliss Forever ink blot on pages thus found care so for affection in this story authenticity will haunt you with sound I will paint you a picture true glory This I present to you with scent thereof kissed with white sage to cleanse aura above *I hope I finally wrote a sonnet correctly. Don't leave me guessing :)

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/21/2020 6:16:00 AM

Both topic, content and rhyme are good, Angela. What could be better is meter, but on the whole you have delivered. ~ Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/21/2020 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. The whole meter thing and iambic pentameter has me confused. I can't find anything on it that makes sense to me. I wanted to try to write one anyway :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/29/2020 4:59:00 AM

I like what Silent One said. Ditto his comment.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/29/2020 4:45:00 PM

Thank you

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2020 8:17:00 AM

Sonnet are fourteen lines and have a rhyme scheme... Meter and iambic pentameter can be part of a sonnet, especially the English one.. Be happy and write with your heart, like the content of this poem

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/28/2020 5:45:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One. I appreciate your help on this. The iambic pentameter is the hardest for me :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/28/2020 5:58:00 AM

Fine sentiments Angela--sonnets are so hard to write for me--especially the meter.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/28/2020 5:44:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Yes, it's very hard :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/27/2020 11:56:00 PM

And a fine sonnet it is, with 10 syllables per line. I wrote a few but I'm not much good at rhyme especially since I am not English or American. So my pronunciation is askew. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/28/2020 5:43:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. I thought I would give it another try :)