Kissed By the Passing Breeze of Awakening

Cul de sac life creeps up on many souls Lost in their sea of living, entering ones unknown Pondering in wondering as to turning it around Going to going to do, amidst unforgiving abounds Twisted turmoil's of thought continues its enter Burrowing its negativity, seeping deep, deeper Whilst this Cul de sac of life, refuses to centre Can, does one escape, life's darkening creeper Then amidst unforgiving abounds, an opening The unknown that was entered shares, hope Slowly eroding ones previous, their hastening Kissed by the Passing Breeze of Awakening
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 13, 2023 at 6:11 AM
All in favour of a fresh breeze of awakening James, great to see your post and it feels so Good to comment, I am quite a sentimental Soul you see.' Or maybe read? Lol))
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