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Kiss of the Breeze

Butterfly rhythms playing on silent wings To the verdant refrain of springtime strings Iridescent dance of the dragonfly Waltzing with the wind beneath azure sky Flowers blushing at the kiss of the breeze As spring smiles upon the birds and the bees Fragrant scent of lilac lilts through the vale Chorus of daffodils sway in the dale Pink blossoms reflection in tranquil lake Swans find serenity, ripples they make 3-22-2021 Rhyming Couplets Contest Sponsor: Janice Canerdy

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 4/12/2021 9:54:00 AM

Brilliantly portrayed Joseph! Loved it!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/11/2021 4:42:00 PM

Wow! Such a richly-deserved POTW with this image-laden beauty, Joseph. Many blessings, Gershon

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 3:10:00 AM

Congratulations on POTW!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/4/2021 1:10:00 AM

Have seen that amazing festival of colour on TV Venkatesh. Enjoyed your verse of hope and celebration, congratulations on POTW. Tom

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 4/3/2021 12:31:00 PM

What a gorgeous idyllic scene! Congrats on POTW!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/29/2021 8:41:00 PM

Well-penned imagery, Joe. Congratulations on POTW. I shall read your poem several times this week. Lovely!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/29/2021 3:02:00 AM

This is such a delightful read, Joseph, love the entire poem, a fave for me:) congratulations on being chosen the Poem of the Week:)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/29/2021 2:49:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery Joe, congratulations on POTW!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2021 5:29:00 PM

absolutely gorgeous Joseph I especially love the dragonfly couplet, many congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/28/2021 2:17:00 PM

What a great choice for POTW. Wonderful imagery. ;0)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/28/2021 1:02:00 PM

"Flowers blushing at the kiss of the breeze" Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Spring is in the Air. Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 3/28/2021 9:41:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK with your beautifully penned poem, well done _Constance

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/28/2021 9:36:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats on poem of the week, Joseph.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/28/2021 8:43:00 AM

This is so lovely Joseph, I am completely in awe, definitely a favourite. Congratulations on poem of the week ~ Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/28/2021 1:40:00 AM

Well written spring couplets Joseph, congratulations on POTW. Enjoy the honour. Tom

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful Couplets Joseph. Wonderful imagery. Absolutely love it. A fave' God Bless and good luck. JB

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/26/2021 9:45:00 PM

Beautiful descriptions of the best time of the year!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/26/2021 7:09:00 AM

Such a beautiful scene you depict.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2021 3:53:00 PM

succinctly sweet and splendid!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/24/2021 9:33:00 AM

Your poem is alive with beautiful sensations, Joseph. I enjoyed reading this imagery rich, pleasing verse. :D

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/22/2021 12:31:00 PM

WoW!Joseph, You have penned such a lovely “ Spring” write. It reiterates why I love the season so much. If it's for a contest, best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2021 8:30:00 PM