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Kiss of the Breeze

Butterfly rhythms playing on silent wings
 To the verdant refrain of springtime strings

 Iridescent dance of the dragonfly
 Waltzing with the wind beneath azure sky

 Flowers blushing at the kiss of the breeze
 As spring smiles upon the birds and the bees

 Fragrant scent of lilac lilts through the vale
 Chorus of daffodils sway in the dale

 Pink blossoms reflection in tranquil lake
 Swans find serenity, ripples they make

 3-22-2021
 Rhyming Couplets Contest
 Sponsor: Janice Canerdy

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Smita Kulkarni

April 12, 2021 at 9:54 AM

Brilliantly portrayed Joseph! Loved it!

Gershon Wolf

April 11, 2021 at 4:42 PM

Wow! Such a richly-deserved POTW with this image-laden beauty, Joseph. Many blessings, Gershon

Tania Kitchin

April 4, 2021 at 3:10 AM

Congratulations on POTW!

Tom Cunningham

April 4, 2021 at 1:10 AM

Have seen that amazing festival of colour on TV Venkatesh. Enjoyed your verse of hope and celebration, congratulations on POTW. Tom

Jennifer Fenn

April 3, 2021 at 12:31 PM

What a gorgeous idyllic scene! Congrats on POTW!

L Milton Hankins

March 29, 2021 at 8:41 PM

Well-penned imagery, Joe. Congratulations on POTW. I shall read your poem several times this week. Lovely!

Joanna Daniel

March 29, 2021 at 3:02 AM

This is such a delightful read, Joseph, love the entire poem, a fave for me:) congratulations on being chosen the Poem of the Week:)

Tania Kitchin

March 29, 2021 at 2:49 AM

Gorgeous imagery Joe, congratulations on POTW!

Jan Allison

March 28, 2021 at 5:29 PM

absolutely gorgeous Joseph I especially love the dragonfly couplet, many congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

March 28, 2021 at 2:17 PM

What a great choice for POTW. Wonderful imagery. ;0)

Brandy Nicole

March 28, 2021 at 1:02 PM

"Flowers blushing at the kiss of the breeze" Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Spring is in the Air. Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Constance La France

March 28, 2021 at 9:41 AM

Joseph, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK with your beautifully penned poem, well done _Constance

Vijay Pandit

March 28, 2021 at 9:36 AM

Back with BIG congrats on poem of the week, Joseph.

Beryl Edmonds

March 28, 2021 at 8:43 AM

This is so lovely Joseph, I am completely in awe, definitely a favourite. Congratulations on poem of the week ~ Belle

Tom Cunningham

March 28, 2021 at 1:40 AM

Well written spring couplets Joseph, congratulations on POTW. Enjoy the honour. Tom

Judy Ball

March 27, 2021 at 8:28 AM

Beautiful Couplets Joseph. Wonderful imagery. Absolutely love it. A fave' God Bless and good luck. JB

Juliet Ligon

March 26, 2021 at 9:45 PM

Beautiful descriptions of the best time of the year!

Victor Buhagiar

March 26, 2021 at 7:09 AM

Such a beautiful scene you depict.

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2021 at 3:53 PM

succinctly sweet and splendid!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 24, 2021 at 9:33 AM

Your poem is alive with beautiful sensations, Joseph. I enjoyed reading this imagery rich, pleasing verse. :D

Alexis Y.

March 22, 2021 at 12:31 PM

WoW!Joseph, You have penned such a lovely “ Spring” write. It reiterates why I love the season so much. If it's for a contest, best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Joseph May

March 22, 2021 at 8:30 PM

It is a lovely season. Thank you Alexis..