Seren Roberts Poet Verse

Kiss of Sunshine

I am a grand yellow flower
Feeling so forlorn
Jack Frost just nipped me
Now I am bent and torn
My head is flopping over
No strength in my stem
Need a little bit of sun
To warm the chill within
What’s that I see above me
I am sure I saw the sun
Here I am, here I am, I shout
Kissing will be fun
I smile now as my head lifts
No longer bent that’s good
Been kissed by the sun all day
No longer need plant food
What is my name I am asking
Lifting my sun kissed head to you
I am the pride of Wales
A smiling daffodil that’s true.

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Lynn Glover April 10, 2013 at 6:58 PM Superb job, great write. Keep up the good work, I love your poetry.

Wayland Bunch March 15, 2013 at 4:30 AM I think I'm reading another poem with double meaning here. I could be wrong, but the words flow so well. Great work either way. Seren Roberts March 15, 2013 at 12:09 PM glad you enjoyed it Wayland...Seren

Tim Ryerson March 15, 2013 at 3:26 AM Just wonderful, Seren...Love the way you make the daffodil come alive and talk...'Jack Frost just nipped me'...Perfect - Tim Seren Roberts March 15, 2013 at 12:10 PM lol thanks Tim...Seren

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2013 at 11:57 PM this is adorable, Seren!!! Love it. and your avatar too! Seren Roberts March 15, 2013 at 12:23 AM Hi Andrea,thought writing from the flowers point of view would be different. Thanks for the comment.....Seren

Victor-Alexander Chibuikem March 14, 2013 at 9:26 PM Awesome description... Seren Roberts March 15, 2013 at 12:22 AM Hello Victor, thank you for stopping by....Seren

Sara Kendrick March 14, 2013 at 2:57 PM Great work describing the Daffodil..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 4:27 PM thanks Sara, i enjoyed writing it ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2013 at 2:08 PM Clap clap clap, bravo! I like your take on the contest. Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 4:28 PM do i get 3 hip hip Hoorays as well, lol me cheeky now ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 14, 2013 at 12:59 PM And what a lovely little daff you are , love it and we could do with some of that sun here , my daffs have still got scarves around their heads as they have kept their greenery underground xx Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 4:29 PM mine are showing there heads but the frost isnt doing them much good....Seren

Jack Ellison March 14, 2013 at 12:29 PM Love your new pic... think I told you before but I'm telling you again! What a sweet poem, dear Seren! Hugs... xoxoxox Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 4:32 PM Thank you for the pic comment.. glad you liked the silly poem....hmmm maybe you will write about a shy daffodil jack....Seren

Russell Sivey March 14, 2013 at 12:29 PM This is truly beautiful and wondrous my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon my friend! I enjoyed the sunshine within your write! What an awesome piece, quite the amazing poem, Great Work!! Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 4:30 PM Hello Russell, glad you enjoyed it....Seren

Debra Squyres March 14, 2013 at 12:22 PM What a fun upbeat poem... the kiss of sun is wonderful for humans and nature. Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 4:32 PM Hi Debra, thanks for stopping by....Seren