Opondi Ougo Poet Dramatic Monologue

Kiss of Life

When I was weak,
And all seemed bleak,
You showed up,
And gave me a peep,
Into tomorrow,
From then,
Everything changed,
You took my heart,
And kept it,
Grew it,
Protected it,
Of you,
I have sweet memories,
Our running in the sand,
Towards the sun,
Our warm nights of July,
And now,
I'm positive,
With new life,
The next generation,
Of bright life,
A product,
Of our love,
I will never forget,
When we first met,
But for now,
Let me stop,
And say thank you,
That I met you,
When our eyes met,
And you gave me,
The wet,red lip,
The chilling,killing smooch,
The kiss of life.

Word Craft
2013

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Laura Breidenthal April 30, 2013 at 5:49 PM Wow, another impressive poem! Lucky to have stumbled upon your work today. This invokes such a beautiful, vivid picture. I like a poem that gets under my skin. "the chilling, killing smooch" Well said! Always, Laura Opondi Ougo May 2, 2013 at 2:29 AM Aw Thank you Laura for your beautiful views,Your pieces are deeper,I'm glad you loved the piece..thanks once again and nice time dear..Word Craft.. :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2013 at 4:11 AM - A truly romantic poem Word. - Must every day feels like a sweet kiss. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) (I posted "Just a Kiss" yesterday) Opondi Ougo April 10, 2013 at 4:29 AM Anne i must confess,-Just A Kiss- is soooo "toxic".....the type you cant read without responding to :-)

David Scott April 9, 2013 at 12:19 PM WICKED LIKE THIS WHATS COOL ALSO i HAVE WROTE A POEM LAST YEAR FOR COMPOTISON ON HERE WITH SAME TITLE LOVE THIS AND THNKS FOR COMENTS ON MINE DAV IDSCOTT Opondi Ougo April 10, 2013 at 4:20 AM hehehehe Dave..thanks for your views..let me find the twin version of it you did :-)

Pace Ink-U-Script April 3, 2013 at 8:14 AM Excellent piece here..reminds me of some of the thoughts in a poem I wrote. Opondi Ougo April 8, 2013 at 4:13 AM Oh thank you Script...kindly give me the title i'd love to look it up a enjoy the beauty that streams from a a beautiful poetic mind such as yours :-)

Betty Bolden February 27, 2013 at 6:56 AM very good job on this my friend.. Opondi Ougo February 27, 2013 at 9:47 AM Thanks Betty...your work is better..thanks to amazing poets like you..I'm learning something new each day, thank you:-)

Charmaine Chircop February 15, 2013 at 7:28 AM lovely poem and to.say.thankyou and have.gratitude makes it more special..Charma Opondi Ougo February 21, 2013 at 1:32 AM Thanks Charma..for your uplifting comments :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 13, 2013 at 7:11 AM Dear Sir, A very thoughtful and sentimental writing that touches the heart without leaving indifferent the mind! Opondi Ougo February 14, 2013 at 3:59 AM Deeply humbled sir..it's an honor to have your views...once again thank you Demetrios:-)