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Kiss me sweet Kiss me quick Only once. I’m not the romantic type. Or so I tell myself. What are you waiting for? No kiss? That kiss is fine. You taste so sweet. I look deep in your eyes: Deep blue like some far-off lagoon. cerulean clear inviting, longing love. I long for a tender kiss. I feel lost. Do you love me? I think of your red luscious lips. I saw you kissing Freddie yesterday. You blush. I blush I’m jealous. We walked hand in hand towards the park. This time, our kiss lingers Not quick, not sweet. Something deeper. Love is in the air.

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Date: 5/30/2025 6:53:00 AM
Dear Victor beautiful romantic first love poem. So tenderly and masterfully written...Hugs
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:48:00 PM
This time, our kiss lingers Not quick, not sweet. Something deeper!
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Date: 5/29/2025 1:16:00 AM
A lovely sentimental Free verse, Victor. There nothing like a kiss and sharing tender moments such as this… Beryl
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Date: 5/27/2025 11:21:00 PM
Ooh la la so romantic, Victor
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Date: 5/27/2025 2:44:00 PM
Sentimental and lovely, your poem illuminates the passion, doubt and joys of a new relationship. I enjoyed the picture of lovers immersed in the colors of the setting sun, as well.
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Date: 5/27/2025 2:39:00 PM
Delightful and romantic, Victor. Very descriptive work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/27/2025 9:44:00 AM
Victor, this is a superb poem with wonderful layers of imagery and a sensual sensation of profound love. So exquisite rhyme, and your lines are so inviting and gorgeous; one of the nicest poems I've read today.
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Date: 5/27/2025 8:27:00 AM
- Did she kiss Freddie yesterday? - What is her kiss worth :))) - She must have some tempting lips :) - A lovely and sweet poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 5/27/2025 7:40:00 AM
so delicious poetry "inspired me for my new affair", your words are so enticing and lovely, one of my favorite today merci poète
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