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Kiss Me Tenderly

Kiss me sweet
        Kiss me quick
               Only once.
I’m not the romantic type.
Or so I tell myself.
         What are you waiting for?
No kiss?
          That kiss is fine.
You taste so sweet.
I look deep in your eyes:
     Deep blue like some far-off lagoon.
cerulean clear inviting, longing love.
I long for a tender kiss.
I feel lost.
          Do you love me?
          I think of your red luscious lips.
I saw you kissing Freddie yesterday.
You blush.
I blush 
I’m jealous.
We walked hand in hand towards the park.  
This time, our kiss lingers
Not quick, not sweet. Something deeper.
Love is in the air.
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Williams Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Dear Victor beautiful romantic first love poem. So tenderly and masterfully written...Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 7:48 PM
This time, our kiss lingers Not quick, not sweet. Something deeper!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 1:16 AM
A lovely sentimental Free verse, Victor. There nothing like a kiss and sharing tender moments such as this… Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 11:21 PM
Ooh la la so romantic, Victor
Buehler Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 2:44 PM
Sentimental and lovely, your poem illuminates the passion, doubt and joys of a new relationship. I enjoyed the picture of lovers immersed in the colors of the setting sun, as well.
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Delightful and romantic, Victor. Very descriptive work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Poet Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Victor, this is a superb poem with wonderful layers of imagery and a sensual sensation of profound love. So exquisite rhyme, and your lines are so inviting and gorgeous; one of the nicest poems I've read today.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 8:27 AM
- Did she kiss Freddie yesterday? - What is her kiss worth :))) - She must have some tempting lips :) - A lovely and sweet poem, Victor :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 7:40 AM
so delicious poetry "inspired me for my new affair", your words are so enticing and lovely, one of my favorite today merci poète
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