Kiss In the Rain

The couple, each hold their black umbrellas They’re out in the rain where it is pouring By their sides are walking gals and fellas But they have stopped in the square ignoring They’re out in the rain where it is pouring The wind starts and blows them both all around But they have stopped in the square ignoring People don’t cross their path, they’re safe and sound The wind starts and blows them both all around They are now without their protective gear People don’t cross their path, they’re safe and sound The couple planned this moment in the square They are now without their protective gear They are getting soaked but they don’t mind this The couple planned this moment in the square Moment surely comes and they start to kiss They are getting soaked but they don’t mind this Their umbrellas are now useless tonight Moment surely comes and they start to kiss Those that watch are seeing quite a great sight Their umbrellas are now useless tonight By their sides are walking gals and fellas Those that watch are seeing quite a great sight The couple, each hold their black umbrellas Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Tacito Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 10:38 PM
The embrace of such a pleasurable innocence, expressed so grandly. How the hell do you do this? Love it!
Horne Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:58 PM
beautiful romantic write, my friend
Kayode Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 10:21 AM
A wonderful one Russel,the couple could not afford to lose at both ends;a great sight indeed. Poetry at peak. Kayod5.
Gasun Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 9:02 AM
A very beautiful poem this is my very dear friend Russell! One of the most difficult forms for me is pantoum but you did it extraordinarily well my dear friend. Kudos! I wrote one pantoum here but I didn't do it correctly, I hope I can make another try again next time with ur inspiration. Thank u so much for sharing & have a nice weekend to you & your family/love ones. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora
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January 26, 2014 at 8:39 AM
You turned the rain to steam with this hot write Russell. You are very good with this form, I really enjoyed it.
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Very good Pantoum...They are not so easy to write..I believe that I have seen an artist rendering of this scene..Thanks for the visit to my page..The cat was filled with catfood that day and was not attracked to the birds at all..Sara
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January 26, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Yes, but I bet the cat still wanted to play with the birds. Unless he was too full. Which could have been the case.
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:12 AM
awesome write Russell it blew me away love it Shadow x smile hug
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January 26, 2014 at 7:05 AM
amazing sight, Russell . the flow has a lyrical sound. Skat
Beam Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 12:42 AM
Nice imagery and flow Russell. I enjoyed the dancing rain
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