Kiss Challenge, (Nathan Your Next)

Kiss Challenge

Taking the ice cubes, from the tray
I coated your lips, with mineral spray
Then lemon squeezed, for a taste of zing
Then lightly froze, the opening
Tracing the corners, and laugh lines blessed
I kissed your lips, of happiness
Tender, succulent, passionate lips
Pulling at my loins, with tender sips 
Sucking each, until they swell
Then freezing again, to ensure the spell
Next I tickle, the skin around
With tongue, I dance inside the frown
Resisting more…………….

 I break away

To tempt you love, another day 


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great way to break a writers block, think pink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 11:33 AM
DAMN!!!!!! Have a great day, Alexandra. Vince
Goff Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 7:51 PM
whoa Sandra! the soup is HOT!!! thanks for comments too! jim
Loving Iii Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 4:50 PM
ahhh to kiss. victom or friend and at my age try this? oh yeah i'm still professing to be young so i might try. John
Leccese Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 3:30 PM
I love challenges! Alright let me get to work on it and see if I don't get turned on lol. Nate
Hudson Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Note to all, this was a reply to a comment Nathan L. made to me from a comment I made to him. In his poem about soupers, he refers to writers block. I commented that a writers block does not exist, if nothing else, describe a kiss. Most can't do it without getting turned on. I must admit, I failed miserably. -AA
Buys Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 10:34 AM
I'll never look at ice cubes the way again, lol. Well done. Love Heidie
Kelly Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Wow !!! ,. AA , what an absolute WOW !! , Yessss , write onnnnnnnn PS , This is not about the Pink Panther , No ??? If not , it left me panting !!! More ice pleeeeeese !! ..
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 6:46 AM
You certainly create a passionate mood with erotic images, Alexandra. I may paste this one over my bed so I can read it when I need some...uh...inspiration? Great work! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Go girl...!! This will melt those ice cubes quickly!! :)
Higgins Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 5:52 AM
This is fire...I am blushing and picturing...nice..
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 4:04 AM
Very Schmexii!Espeacially The whole "Sucking till it swells"(!)Wowers:p
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