Kiss

that kiss from you
   like footprints in the sand
 keeps my heartbeats ticking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Nice haiku with good images, Suresh. I think you should give once over to the syllable counts,
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February 4, 2011 at 4:24 PM
a lovley write, love the second line, enjoyed your haiku Suresh,..p.d.
Nutter Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Nice Haiku,
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