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Kismet's Embrace

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Written: February 21, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Craig Cornish ***************** A whispered secret shrouds my soul, softening spars— In the silver glow of the moon, chaos outside fades away, Mint chords and vivid vines mold my heart to sing. Rich nostalgia merges as thin sprigs gasp in the gloom. Seraphic star mosaics inspire awe and apodictic will; the soft waltz of life and death is woven amid stars. In this serene hour, my heart races with anticipation, Time flows akin to sand, echoing the rhythm of evolving life, The mild wind carries ripe tales that only silence can reveal— exotic oceans and lofty heights stir our dreams. I'm drawn to the night soap aroma as night falls. Still spirits deep darkness blooms, spilling secrets — In this timeless ocean, hours lose their meaning . . . By embracing the moment, I bind the past with kismet, Dawn alters me with shadow and silence, and I emerge poised to embrace the day’s spurs. Morning’s light dispels the remnants of night’s shadows, I return to my sacred space, to my crux of serenity— where stars and a glittering sea reflect in my tears. Each is a memory, a moment of joy, a shard of a lost love.

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Date: 3/4/2025 3:21:00 AM
beautiful lines here, 'Still spirits deep darkness blooms/Dawn alters me with shadow and silence', I did listen to the poem, but did not understand the video though. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 2/23/2025 6:23:00 PM
SP, I truly love the evening's adventure you've created...the thoughts that you revel in sleep and what happens during the night. I do hope you have much joy every day. The poetry is amazing. BTW, the video with musical endings is a great fit. Each ending is exotic and leads to something. Smiles, sir!!
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Date: 2/23/2025 8:07:00 AM
Wow Lasaad this is an emotional heartfelt write that only a master in his craft can write, and that is you my friend. A lost love you so brilliantly write of using metaphoric unique thoughts that bring such sadness in the end. My friend your impressive thoughts always are deep and clever and as an expressive writer you are one of the best I have humbly read. I wrote a poem Lasaad that Maria Williams and her Husband Ron put to a video and music I would like for you to see and enjoy.
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Date: 2/23/2025 8:09:00 AM
If you have the time please comment on the video your comments I always look forward to reading they are detailed and always exact to what I think also. Thank you my friend...
Date: 2/23/2025 7:56:00 AM
Hi Sotto, Your wording always so eloquent, your subjects carefully researched and chosen and your end iresult so imaginative, and so remarkably creative, I applaud you my friend for this gem and every other one you have posted, Hugs and blessings, Jernnifer
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Date: 2/22/2025 8:50:00 AM
Ah what a wise and deeply meaningful take on the prompt. I especially love the lines “ The mild wind carries ripe tales that only silence can reveal— exotic oceans and lofty heights stir our dreams. ” so true in silence if we truly listen we will hear so much! I love the abstract nature of your word weaving here and how it flows in such an eloquent manner as always . Theres so much packed here that the readers can take and grasp from . Profound poem , quite different too for the prompt. Best wishes! Pleasure reading you today
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Date: 2/22/2025 8:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Last Line... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away......................
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Date: 2/21/2025 5:52:00 PM
Very sensitive - a true sense of vulnerability and barring soul
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