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Kingdoms of Silk

Worms in multitudes, Strewn empires in the trees: Palace made of thread.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 12:30:00 PM
Raul, the words come spinning from your thoughts and spun on to pper, kool write >> James
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Date: 10/3/2009 10:58:00 PM
would like to see this! thanks Raul! I think I will google!... jim
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Date: 10/3/2009 5:54:00 AM
silk worms,im thinking of silkworms eating mulberry leaves,silkworms can make a palace of finest thread on the other hand can considered as a destruction to nature,,depends of the view.. when i think of silk worms i think like you Raul,a kingdom of silk.. very creative--excellent--Charma
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Date: 10/3/2009 3:46:00 AM
Raul, CONGRATULATIONS to you as well! Love your poetry. Kelly
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Date: 10/2/2009 3:32:00 PM
Interesting Haiku. Today these silk worms would be considered a pest. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/2/2009 2:02:00 PM
I am always amazed, Raul....how you find beautiful poetry in every part of nature! Another outstanding haiku!! :)
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:21:00 PM
Raul this is ~~~Magnificent~~~ Thank you. Love, Carol
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