Kingdoms of Silk

Worms in multitudes,
Strewn empires in the trees:
Palace made of thread.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Raul, the words come spinning from your thoughts and spun on to pper, kool write >> James
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October 3, 2009 at 10:58 PM
would like to see this! thanks Raul! I think I will google!... jim
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October 3, 2009 at 5:54 AM
silk worms,im thinking of silkworms eating mulberry leaves,silkworms can make a palace of finest thread on the other hand can considered as a destruction to nature,,depends of the view.. when i think of silk worms i think like you Raul,a kingdom of silk.. very creative--excellent--Charma
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October 3, 2009 at 3:46 AM
Raul, CONGRATULATIONS to you as well! Love your poetry. Kelly
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 3:32 PM
Interesting Haiku. Today these silk worms would be considered a pest. Keep writing. Sara
Richards Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 2:02 PM
I am always amazed, Raul....how you find beautiful poetry in every part of nature! Another outstanding haiku!! :)
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October 2, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Raul this is ~~~Magnificent~~~ Thank you. Love, Carol
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