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Kingdom of Dirt

Pillars of red earth, Layered by legions of ants; Winding catacombs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 2:45:00 PM
sure sounds like the ants are busy! :)
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Date: 8/2/2009 12:52:00 PM
Uh, indeed people really don't realize how big the animal kingdom can turn out to be @.@ specially ants...the title reminded me of a song.. "And you could have it all/my empire of dirt" jojojo thanks for the comments and for the experience =D enjoy nature, I know you do!=D
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Date: 7/29/2009 4:56:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. Fitting title. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 7/29/2009 2:13:00 PM
Super Haiku Raul>>James
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Date: 7/29/2009 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid Haiku with us today Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2009 6:50:00 AM
A whole world in minature going on! ~ So interesting to observe!
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:26:00 AM
Very descriptive ant mound. Sara
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