Kingdom of Dirt

Pillars of red earth,
Layered by legions of ants;
Winding catacombs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lacey Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 2:45 PM
sure sounds like the ants are busy! :)
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August 2, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Uh, indeed people really don't realize how big the animal kingdom can turn out to be @.@ specially ants...the title reminded me of a song.. "And you could have it all/my empire of dirt" jojojo thanks for the comments and for the experience =D enjoy nature, I know you do!=D
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July 29, 2009 at 4:56 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. Fitting title. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
Fraser Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 2:13 PM
Super Haiku Raul>>James
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid Haiku with us today Raul. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 6:50 AM
A whole world in minature going on! ~ So interesting to observe!
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July 29, 2009 at 1:26 AM
Very descriptive ant mound. Sara
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