Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

King Without Crown

KING WITHOUT CROWN

Unafraid, magnificent fur of golden brown
A king but neither has a throne nor crown
Thunder roar rumbles and echoes up to the core
As they can rule round corps and every floor

Direct shot to the heart
Leo is the fifth in Zodiac chart
Ferocious, brave and bold 
Yet, a Leo has a heart of gold

Predicate and pride to pillars day and night
Always on guard, fierce and so might
Be respectful that Leo prefers!
as he knows well his ''Lion share...''

His warmth a blazing ember!
Yet, when challenge appears he fires in anger!
He is ruled by the immortal sun
Hence, with any endeavor his aim a home run!

(c) Olive ELoisa
5:32 am
July 27, 2014

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Jan Allison August 25, 2014 at 9:16 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta August 25, 2014 at 1:10 AM Congratulations on first place win in tghe contest, Olive

Robert Lindley August 24, 2014 at 1:55 PM This is a very fine write my friend. Congrats on your great win!!

Shadow Hamilton August 24, 2014 at 11:39 AM love this poem Olive congrats on fine win hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2014 at 11:16 AM - Hey Olive, congratulations on your first place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos August 24, 2014 at 9:52 AM Olive, congratulations on a TOP of the class win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita

Len Gasun August 24, 2014 at 9:48 AM A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Olive Eloisa! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora

Robert Lindley August 10, 2014 at 12:37 PM A CROWN I now give to you for this great right. I won it long ago with guile and might. An unworthy soul like myself. Placed it upon a hidden shelf. Now setting it to light of day. Beg you to accept this I humble gift pray... Great write my friend!!!!

Robert Lindley August 10, 2014 at 12:36 PM A CROWN I now give to you for this great right. I won it long ago with guile and might. An unworthy soul like myself. Placed it upon a hidden shelf. Now setting it to light of day. Beg you to accept this I humble gift pray... Great write my friend!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 10, 2014 at 10:36 PM thanks much Robert.. :) you don't need to beg nor give me a crown as your friendship is more than enough.. :D regards to your family.. :D God bless you. :)

Jerry T Curtis July 25, 2014 at 7:09 AM This is Magnificently done, Bravo Olive, coincidently I'm a Leo, Ha! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 10, 2014 at 1:44 PM Thank you so much sir..I appreciate it..:)

Arthur Vaso July 23, 2014 at 9:35 PM You know me well, no throne and no crown, this is a magnificent poem Olive! Well done! King Arthur Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 26, 2014 at 7:15 AM Thanks so munch King Arthur.. :D hahaha like your drop by.. :P

Paul Callus July 18, 2014 at 5:30 AM Lovely imagery Olive-eloi; you capture all the main ingredients that this lion king requires; good luck in the contest (do you need it!?) // paul Paul Callus August 24, 2014 at 4:50 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! A very merited top placed win:) Lovely to be standing together on same podium!! Hope you're keeping well:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 20, 2014 at 6:19 PM thank you so much PAul.. :D I appreciate your every drop by..:D you inspire me so well.. :D thanks much.. :D

James Fraser July 17, 2014 at 3:22 PM Your fast becoming one of my favourites to read, and it's not hard to see why if many others view your writes. I want to be a Lion now, but'll have to settle for being a goat, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 20, 2014 at 3:20 PM Thanks much James..:) you are very generous to your comments..:)

Jan Allison July 17, 2014 at 7:16 AM You roared in with this one Olive! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 20, 2014 at 3:19 PM Thank you so much Jan..:) I appreciate you dropping by..:)

Monterey Sirak July 17, 2014 at 6:50 AM You never fail to impress me with your creativity and stunning imagery. This one is another gem. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 19, 2014 at 9:49 AM Thank you so much Monterey.. Im so honored that I receive such comment from a poetess like you.. :) God bless you.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 17, 2014 at 5:43 AM As wonderful as ever is ur this write dear Olive,, loved to read //upma// Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 19, 2014 at 9:48 AM Thank you so much Dr. Upma.. :)