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King Forever

king of the castle master of all I survey my territory panoramic view rough stonework castellation fresh breeze, muffled sounds see people below most will not/cannot see me: ancient castle’s ghost Jack Horne

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James Foulk

Date: 6/27/2011 12:13:00 PM

a very creative and well done poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2011 1:21:00 PM

Creative work..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 7:50:00 PM

aha! you put yourself as a ghost. VEry keen. Congratulations on your win with this unique entry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 7:50:00 PM

oh, I love the title too!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/22/2011 2:45:00 PM

Hi Jack.... This King Forever piece tells it like it is from a ghostly king's perspective. Congrats on this winning poem and all the imagination that you put in it. All the best to you, Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 12:21:00 PM

So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Jack. Congratulations, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:57:00 AM

I liked it 1st time around.Congrats Jack on your win...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 8:21:00 AM

Congrats Jack on your great big win in Michael's contest with these brilliant words my friend.. enjoy a special win with luv ..honored to be sharing winners list with u ...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on this win in the contest of michael, jack

Cory Long

Date: 5/22/2011 6:59:00 AM

congrats on your win with this fine pen. cory

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 9:19:00 AM

another wow! a tale of ones tale... your greatness is forever... great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 5/19/2011 11:01:00 AM

I like your haiku. Nice ending.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/12/2011 9:12:00 AM

Ohh this excellent jack.Best wishes....

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 5/9/2011 4:22:00 AM

Chilling tale,,,bravo

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2011 8:58:00 AM

Wow, I really enjoyed how you read Michael standing at the castle, Good luck in the contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/8/2011 8:46:00 AM

Ahh, I like your spooky interpretation of the photo, Jack. Sometimes when we visit these historic sites, we imagine ourselves as having lived there. Great description of the castle as well. I think Michael will enjoy this as much as I did. Quite original! Best wishes in his contest. Love, Carolyn