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King Forever

king of the castle
master of all I survey
my territory

panoramic view
rough stonework castellation
fresh breeze, muffled sounds

see people below
most will not/cannot see me:
ancient castle’s ghost

Jack Horne

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2011

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James Foulk Date: 6/27/2011 12:13:00 PM a very creative and well done poem. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/20/2011 1:21:00 PM Creative work..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/23/2011 7:22:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Jack. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/22/2011 7:50:00 PM aha! you put yourself as a ghost. VEry keen. Congratulations on your win with this unique entry. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/22/2011 7:50:00 PM oh, I love the title too! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/22/2011 2:45:00 PM Hi Jack.... This King Forever piece tells it like it is from a ghostly king's perspective. Congrats on this winning poem and all the imagination that you put in it. All the best to you, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/22/2011 12:21:00 PM So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Jack. Congratulations, my friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/22/2011 8:57:00 AM I liked it 1st time around.Congrats Jack on your win... Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/22/2011 8:21:00 AM Congrats Jack on your great big win in Michael's contest with these brilliant words my friend.. enjoy a special win with luv ..honored to be sharing winners list with u ... Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/22/2011 8:07:00 AM Congratulations on this win in the contest of michael, jack Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 5/22/2011 6:59:00 AM congrats on your win with this fine pen. cory Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/21/2011 9:19:00 AM another wow! a tale of ones tale... your greatness is forever... great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d. Login to Reply

Ashley Plotczyk Date: 5/19/2011 11:01:00 AM I like your haiku. Nice ending. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/12/2011 9:12:00 AM Ohh this excellent jack.Best wishes.... Login to Reply

Robb A. Kopp Date: 5/9/2011 4:22:00 AM Chilling tale,,,bravo Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/8/2011 8:58:00 AM Wow, I really enjoyed how you read Michael standing at the castle, Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/8/2011 8:46:00 AM Ahh, I like your spooky interpretation of the photo, Jack. Sometimes when we visit these historic sites, we imagine ourselves as having lived there. Great description of the castle as well. I think Michael will enjoy this as much as I did. Quite original! Best wishes in his contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply