Doris Culverhouse Poet Pantoum

King Fisher

Sailing low over the rich waters eyes alert
Wings majestic as your name suggests.
The bluish grey feathers off set with a white neck ring
Descriptive crown above your head
Wings magestic as your name suggests
Allows you to soar across the spring.
Descriptive crown above your head
No gold nor silver can be more pure
Allows you to soar across the spring.
The bluish grey feathers off set with a white neck ring
No gold nor silver can be more pure
Sailing low over the rich waters eyes alert.


Pantoum for contest by Paula 
Belted King Fisher

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David Williams July 28, 2011 at 12:00 PM hey Doris, congrats on your win, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2011 at 5:31 PM Congrats Doris on your great big win in Pantoum with this great write luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Doris. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 27, 2011 at 11:00 AM amazing write, doeis..applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire July 16, 2011 at 3:16 PM Dear Doris, Superb Write Congratulations Ahead of TIme How are YOU and YOURS I'm sorry I haven't kept in touch with YOU I will try to be more diligant LOVE ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )

Phyllis Babcock July 15, 2011 at 5:07 PM Beautiful poem for a beautiful bird. Love the blue color of this bird and blue being my fav color ----well how can I not like this . Have a great weekend. love phyl

James Peranteau July 14, 2011 at 12:48 PM Great entry Doris ! Such a fine Pantoum dear poet on yes, as you mention here, "Magestic", the King Fisher ! Have a blessed week...much love, james

Michael Wayne July 14, 2011 at 6:48 AM I enjoyed this poem very much Doris

Kash Poet July 14, 2011 at 6:26 AM Beautiful Lovely poem...I like King Fishers.

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2011 at 6:08 AM Reads like a winning work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and finding my work humorous..I thought that it was funny idea myself..Mom

Judy Ball July 13, 2011 at 10:23 PM I do love these birds. They're so pretty. Good description. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2011 at 9:08 PM this is a wonderful description of a King Fisher! I hope it does well in the contest, Doris!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 7:02 PM a beautiful Pantoum Doris .. on a lovely creature .. super descriptive my friend.. good luck in the contest .. feel like flying now..