Kinetic Kindness

Do you know that unseen someone is tending the tender leaf? Do you feel the moving spirit behind the ladybird on the tender leaf moving free? Do you think of the force of swiftness in the wake of which birds fly to and fro collecting food? Do you see the care granted by someone that enables them selecting every blade of grass and bit of cloth bit of cotton jute and fiber to create the best of nests? Do you feel such an active Spirit making his home in you and me too, and enabling us to sleep and rise and breath and live? To that Great Spirit of Kindness is my Zenith of Salam.

you are not kind, Lord
You're the storehouse of kindness
We're just your stewards


18 August 2021
Kindness Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh
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Fenn Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Hi! I liked the part about the unseen someone. We often don't realize who is being kind behind the scene, whether it's God Himself or someone God is using to help others. I also really like the haiku at the end. Good luck in the contest.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:03 AM
WoW! Amazing! Loved it! I believe God is in all, doing it all.
Kiser Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 2:45 PM
A very sincere Haibun, that spirit is everywhere indeed. Well done.
Alex Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Thank you very much.
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