Kind Obscene Man

A curious man loved his mother Whenever he came to visit He would give her many hugs Then he would loudly yell Curse obscenities Then he would love With a heart He would Scream
Russell Sivey Entrant into yasmin khan's "Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde" contest 2/20/2012
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Mister Roboto Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 9:54 PM
I do not recall lending you permission to write about me :). Cussin' ta' Mama is how we do it in the South WOOO HOO!~
Culverhouse Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 8:43 AM
tru' dat.....Hyde the knives!!
Ball Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 4:13 AM
WoW! Can reflect on this. My husband had a brother who was schizophrenic. They go through so much confusion and upset. Good write here. God Bless, JB
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:08 AM
ohh, a short one that says so much, russel.. i can feel the split with your deep inages.. winning huggs!.. thanks for visiting " gray haired wisdom... love your personal gift! :)
Pettit Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 9:15 PM
Reads like a good description of my brother. Good nonet Russell.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:39 PM
I think he is bi-polar, Russell. that is what you have described because I have known a few of these poor fellows!!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 8:45 PM
a wonderful analogy on the contest theme Russell.. showing both the good and evil side of humanity luv.. good luck in contest .. very fluent..
Johnson Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:21 PM
double sided poor ol coin, sweet n sour do they adjoin, this hour? who is in power, was it purlioned? re Russells Dr Jeckll... Don
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February 20, 2012 at 8:59 AM
good luck in contest
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