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Kind Obscene Man

A curious man loved his mother Whenever he came to visit He would give her many hugs Then he would loudly yell Curse obscenities Then he would love With a heart He would Scream
Russell Sivey Entrant into yasmin khan's "Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde" contest 2/20/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 9:54:00 PM
I do not recall lending you permission to write about me :). Cussin' ta' Mama is how we do it in the South WOOO HOO!~
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:43:00 AM
tru' dat.....Hyde the knives!!
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:13:00 AM
WoW! Can reflect on this. My husband had a brother who was schizophrenic. They go through so much confusion and upset. Good write here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:08:00 AM
ohh, a short one that says so much, russel.. i can feel the split with your deep inages.. winning huggs!.. thanks for visiting " gray haired wisdom... love your personal gift! :)
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:15:00 PM
Reads like a good description of my brother. Good nonet Russell.
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:39:00 PM
I think he is bi-polar, Russell. that is what you have described because I have known a few of these poor fellows!!
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:45:00 PM
a wonderful analogy on the contest theme Russell.. showing both the good and evil side of humanity luv.. good luck in contest .. very fluent..
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:21:00 PM
double sided poor ol coin, sweet n sour do they adjoin, this hour? who is in power, was it purlioned? re Russells Dr Jeckll... Don
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:59:00 AM
good luck in contest
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