Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Kind Feelings

Never got to say all I needed too..
Motionless words as this bird flew..

Now I look out my window to reach 
your mind..
I talk to the sky and send feelings
that are kind..

On a quiet night when your thoughts 
are clear..
Out your window they fly with no harm
or fear..

If you smile for no reason, I'll know why..
Maybe just a few have reached your eyes..


For PD's contest... The reason I picked this piece is because this past month I was able to hear from this lady for whom I wrote this piece about.. I emailed it to her and she was so grateful that I still cared enough to write for her..It gave us closer and helped us both realize why we are better where we are now... love doesn't stop it just gets transformed into a better friendship...

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Poet Destroyer A September 28, 2011 at 8:36 AM Dear Michael, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 3:04 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 20, 2011 at 6:51 PM Congrats Michael luv on second place win with this favorite poem so awesome...and so nice to be sharing once again the placement with the W.K. of P.S... your Jersey Girl in honored mode.. as well as moving with aches and pains mode..oh.. massage necessary...oh..GMEN on the move..xoxo..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 20, 2011 at 12:31 PM Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Michael

Bob Quigley September 20, 2011 at 12:22 PM A thoughtful testimony and so true. Congratulations Michael

Audrey Haick March 5, 2011 at 8:16 PM Always enjoy your poem, Michael. This is special also. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 5, 2011 at 4:50 AM Hope u and fair lady are well this happy weekend.. Ron just got home from a week in Pittsburgh to visit his grown children so he is wound up ..haha.. supposed to be warm? today and lots of rain tomorrow so am trying to get my comments in early Michael.. hope u guys have a lovely weekend ...Jersey Girl with her Romeo intact..haha..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 3, 2011 at 7:57 PM Looking forward to your catching up Michael and u are so very welcome for the first place as your entry was superb my friend.. your Jersey Girl luved it ... and u ... always and forever ...

February 27, 2011 at 10:51 AM This is a very eloquent write, enjoyed reading.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2011 at 5:53 PM Enjoy Michale and have fun my W.K. with lady fair beside u..your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2011 at 12:17 PM Sweetly elegant lines my White Knight of P.S. .. u convey such breathless emotion when u create a piece.. I luv it .. but I luv them all ..your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

Wilma Neels February 25, 2011 at 8:44 PM Mr. F you verbalize feelings I can identify with on all levels, so maybe I am crazy too hey? ;) Awesome piece of poetry my friend, like I said I can totally relate to this one like so many of the others.. Love W

Tara Jennings February 25, 2011 at 6:26 PM some thing that keps coming back lately, like a verse forming, is that those I love become part of my soul. Distance and death doesn't steal that love. Souls connected never part. Even after they leave I still breathe that love, and the connection still beats. SO much of your poems I've read talk of this love and remind me of life still here. and again thank you

Michael J. Falotico February 25, 2011 at 3:45 PM I'm sure we all have someone that has crossed through our lives and we wanted to say more but couldn't....Just some thoughts from a crazy poets mind...

Sharon Ruebel February 25, 2011 at 3:45 PM Hello Michael, I could 't end my week without reading one of your poems causing my eyes and heart to tear. I keep a box of kleenex here at my desk now Michael. This is so going into my favorites. Your words are sent from above I think Lov, Shar

Earle Brown February 25, 2011 at 3:25 PM lovely