Kind

Kind

I saw your face for the first time
My whole body trembled like a carriage going fast on a train line
Our first kiss was so so so sublime
We disappeared into a world that was perfect with only our minds
When I heard your voice for the first time
It was like angels being released from their chains from the Gods like a song line
When I looked into your eyes for the first time
I knew I would do anything for you even commit crime
When I made love to you for the first time
I felt doves bursting out of my heart and into the light of a shining love rhyme 
When you left me for the last time
You shattered my dreams and I felt emptiness and that no one could ever be so unkind; no one could ever be so unkind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Petersen Potter Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 6:57 AM
Very nice pen Peter! Much enjoyed your romantic piece my dear friend. Have a good day! :) Love and blessings! xxxxx D. ^O^"
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