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Killing Myself

Go kill yourself that is all I heard at school But I can’t I have a family It would take all my sorrows and trials away forever My mom would be left to be alone without me No more sadness or verbal abuse Satan would have won My emotions would have left me forever The angels would have to let me fall My horrible body would be gone My relationships would all end forever To many voices and to many lies Everyone says they get it and they will help No one understands me and my problems Only one person understands me And that person isn’t strong enough I am not strong enough All I wanted was a friend Is that too much to ask I am alone in a world of seven billion people I guess im not worth much Good bye forever

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/1/2016 11:16:00 PM

nice to see this one again, Garrett. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2015 10:13:00 AM

Garrett, this is a sad poem. I hope it's only a poem. This place is a great place to express yourself in any which way you like. It heals certain emotions. HUGS. By the way this is A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 11:23:00 AM

Garrett, back here again. thank you so much for the compliment. Means a lot, coming from a new poet. I hope the character in this poem's fictional. But, in case he//she's real. I'd like to be his/her friend. I can't believe others are so inconsiderate of others. No one should ever give in to the hurt. It's better to have a weak friend than no friend at all. The world is corrupted. We are programmed to think and feel less of ourselves. This is a great poem. Glad I came back for a second scan. SK

Garrett Blake
Date: 5/18/2015 1:16:00 PM

Thank you this means a lot and I will admit this is one of many poems I have written of my experiences I am happy that someone cares and likes it

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 10:38:00 AM

Garrett, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT