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Killing Kilojoules

my noble efforts seem to be in vain my sweat army fights a huge enemy In every ugly battle we take strain battle weary troops are my penalty my weak will my only soft weaponry defiant kilojoules taunt my sweat troops they gather themselves in organized groups their guerrilla warfare holds the war reign a sneaky snack attack caused a big whoops now I have to rethink my whole campaign -19 July-

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Date: 7/19/2016 6:54:00 AM
Whether kilojoules or sneaky snack ... wonderful ... Fine poetry ...
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Date: 7/19/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Probir