Killer Blade of Stress

In and out, the body seem to fade one more push on the mind is a crime to good and long life, it is a huge blade as for the need to rest, oh dear, no time too much fire won’t make gold from jade no item can save the wave, not a dime can pile to take it up a high grade then make life less, just when in its prime a live wire on life to prohibit to run in free flow, it will inhibit not wise to let this heat exhibit end to end to make good use of the day when it is time, let the body lay so that a mind at rest can have a say
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 11:01 AM
We all need our rest to recuperate and clear our head. Wise words indeed in a well written sonnet, Funom.
Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Thank you so much Timothy Hicks
Hay Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Many people will be able to connect to this one Funom, I particularly like how this ends. We should all slow down and be more mindful. A 7 from me, kind Rgds Laura
Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much Laura Hay
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