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Premiere Contest Winner- Killed Without Reason -

Dare you look deep into this darkness
Persecution of Jews - Holocaust
In Hebrew, this has the genocide
been called Shoah,
which means disaster or destruction


The journey has just begun,

and it is far from over

The destination is Auschwitz 

to a place without return

The smell of vomit, urine and excrement is overwhelming

Without food and water, trapped in an unbearable heat

Everything is better than nothing

witch's brew, eaten with Satan's fork

made of bats, rats, worm and mice

The vultures is the bird and the messenger

who hunt along the train tracks

Dark tracks ... Jews were sent in closed

freight wagon - before they ended their lives in gas chambers

Their souls destroyed by evil and hatred

Neither will, power, alliances

or the strongest alpha males

- cannot escape the dirty claws of the Nazis

A young mother was raped by the soldiers

White dress with sewn-on transparent arms

a newborn baby suckles the mother's naked breast

It is definitely not for the faint of heart

Shoah !

Through tears, sweat and blood, 

from generation to generation

At home in the window frame a red Begonia blooms

- for the last time

The door is branded with a yellow star 








13/04/2021
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Last Train To Auschwitz Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
1st place in the contest
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Allison Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 10:34 AM
your poem keeps on the story of the holocaust from ever being forgotten, such a powerful piece, many congrats on your top spot, I found the subject too difficult to write about - my father's mother died in a work camp in Siberia:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:13 AM
- It was sad to hear, Jan - Thank you very much for reading this poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile , there was too much pain then too much suffering to. So sad . Enjoy your evening my friend.
Venkataraman Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:43 AM
The language is simple and easy to follow/ It takes us step by step to gloom/ Again such a dictator must never arise/ Humanity must be always careful/ None must enslave mankind/ To spell disaster to the World/ Can't even imagine such a past/ Long live Russia who defeated Germany/ Super powers must stand ever united God/ To save all the innocent souls!
Gasun Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 9:01 PM
Congratulations on your Top Win my dear friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece. Take care always. Hugs.
Romios Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Yaaa,,top win...CONGRATULATIONS. PANGIE XX
Daniel Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 6:09 AM
You portray the deep pain they had to undergo, Anne-lise, congratulations on your win:)
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 10:50 PM
Well written and said, Anne-Lise , congratulations on your top win. Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Powerful stuff Anne-Lise, congrats.
Agustin Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 7:02 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this grim reality in your poetic style. God bless you.
Ligon Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Lots of powerful descriptions of a horrific existence. Your ending paints a memorable picture. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day.................
Neumann Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. A powerful write ...
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Heya Anne Lise, congratulations on your top win, about this truly horrific episode in humanities history, it really bites into the soul, cheers David
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 3:40 AM
Congrats on your top win with this powerful write!! we have all been to Auschwitz many times in visiting the horrors of others.
Cunningham Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:29 AM
Back with congratulations Anne on your trophy win. Well done. Tom
Babcock Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Man at his most evil. Makes me shutter just to think of all the horror that went on. Well written my friend. love phyl
Proxenos Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 9:25 AM
This is an amazing write my friend - I wanted to write for this contest also, but I must check if it is still open. Thinking of the 18th often, you are in my thoughts and prayers. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 11:55 PM
If history is not taught and we remember we are doomed to repeat it. Great write my friend. God Bless, JB
Babbit Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Lest we forget as those lives shattered.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Evil comes from men's choices. In the end man must account for his choices. Great poem.
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:32 AM
- We humans are the worst when it comes to evil, Victor ... animals kill to survive - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leffanta Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Read about the Inquisition before you read the Bible to understand why God flooded His world and continues to permit slaughter in the Middle East! Nice write! Aloha! Rico
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:20 AM
- These cruel acts have nothing to do with what is written in the Bible ... The words of the Bible clearly explain both in the New Testament that applies to the time of Jesus and in the Old Testament (OT) that one should not kill other people, Rico - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, You've penned such a well-written and sad write on how the Jewish people were treated. The conditions they were subject to were inhuman. A tragic chapter in history that shouldn't have ever happened. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day- Alexis
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:16 AM
- Heartless and inhuman deeds ... a tragic part of our history, Alexis - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Seeker Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Heart searing brutality at its worst, as yet still replayed just beyond the cocoon of our metro boundaries, to which we are are yet oblivious, as also apathetic. Brilliant write, Sunshine!
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:24 AM
- You're right ... there are a lot of atrocities in the world, U.S. - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 9:10 AM
How deeply moving your words are, a beautiful contender for the contest, Winning wishes dear, I pray this kind of cruelty never happens again, Once in a life time was too much xo
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:14 AM
- Should never have happened, Vie Rose ... how cruel people can be - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 8:42 AM
You brought the horrors to life Anne, everyone ive read tells the horrors of transportation and the final destination, the death camp. Best of luck and hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:12 AM
- A black part of our history, Tom - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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