Kill Me Under The Stars

If you have to ruin me,
don't do it under kitchen lights
or in parked cars
or over phone calls filled with silence.

Take me somewhere the sky is endless.

Somewhere the stars
have been dying for years
without anyone noticing.

Let me look up at something ancient,
something that understands
how beautiful things can disappear.

And if this is the ending,

if I have to lose whatever version 
of me still believes in forever,
then let it happen there.

Because I think

I'd rather break apart
Beneath constellations
Than inside another room that forgets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Theraven Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Hello Beccah, Lyrical gem in end; beautiful spoils of war under these skies. -Richard
Bath Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 8:19 AM
Oh I really like that for the ending thank you 😊
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