Kilauea Erupts

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a magma fountain molten lava boils the sea... fire morphs into steam Kilauea erupts Hawaiians leave gifts for Pele... to help stem its flow (Haiku) 06/04/2023 Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Sponsored by: Dilly Dally (How Many Syllables)

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 11:16:00 AM

Great comparisons and language expresses urgency. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2023 1:06:00 PM

Thanks, Dilly; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend; Emile.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2023 10:37:00 AM

Excellent Haiku to differentiate show from tell, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2023 1:05:00 PM

Thanks, Lin; it is nice to hear from you; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/4/2023 4:00:00 PM

Hello Emile, The people that live there are in damger when the volcano erupts. Where do the people go for shelter?My friend. Enjoy your evening. Loks lik3 a winner to me. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2023 10:50:00 AM

Hello Emile, I do wonder where the people go for protection. Your welcome my dear friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/5/2023 8:29:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2023 12:42:00 PM

- Show and Tell well done, Emile - GL in the contest - hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/4/2023 1:27:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.