Emile Pinet Poet Haiku

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Kilauea Erupts

a magma fountain
molten lava boils the sea...
fire morphs into steam


Kilauea erupts
Hawaiians leave gifts for Pele...
to help stem its flow


(Haiku)


06/04/2023


Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show
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Lin Lane June 12, 2023 at 10:37 AM Excellent Haiku to differentiate show from tell, Emile. Emile Pinet June 12, 2023 at 1:05 PM Thanks, Lin; it is nice to hear from you; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu June 4, 2023 at 4:00 PM Hello Emile, The people that live there are in damger when the volcano erupts. Where do the people go for shelter?My friend. Enjoy your evening. Loks lik3 a winner to me. /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu June 5, 2023 at 10:50 AM Hello Emile, I do wonder where the people go for protection. Your welcome my dear friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\ Emile Pinet June 5, 2023 at 8:29 AM Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2023 at 12:42 PM - Show and Tell well done, Emile - GL in the contest - hugs Emile Pinet June 4, 2023 at 1:27 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.