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Kierkegaard's Song

I once had a darling, how she lingers And with her the song of fools I did sing But wrapped around my wedding finger I have only the tattoo of a ring Love divine has a face that stares me in The eye whenever I lay down to rest and every time I even begin To fade, her lovely smile swells my caged chest Hazel is the hue that haunts my poor heart In the hollow of my dead despair Her name is the whisper that tears me apart That relieves, if to whisper it I dare I once had a darling, how she loved me Forever and always she holds the key

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 10:47:00 AM
A amazing poem. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:40:00 PM
Jonathan, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 9:25:00 AM
PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:04:00 AM
Congrats Jonathan on your sonnet being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:37:00 PM
Woooow! Very creative poet. Congratulations on your featured poem. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:50:00 AM
Jonathan - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/21/2009 6:47:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:17:00 PM
And yet I feel none of the philosopher's eternal suffering ... for this poem is rich and worthy of its exalting. Well done, my friend.
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Date: 6/1/2009 1:31:00 PM
Good use of this challenging poem for creative view on love. Interesting title. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Karen
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