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Kids' Naughty Game

Like cats and dogs they love and fight Then giggle through the beam of night… Ellie plans a game, how fun and right Along the grass where moon shines bright, When naughty cousins fly a kite Its tassels blazing, red to white; As Peyton holds the strings real tight. The wind dives low with forceful might Kids tumbling like their toy’s low height. Suddenly, a rush brings them fright Is it a creature dark or light? Without thought, they run from the site Into the yard, the gang on flight; Inflaming laughter, what a sprite! Personal Memories Monorhyme II Contest of Laura Loo 6/14/1016

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Date: 6/19/2016 12:26:00 PM
A reacquaintance with our childhood days. The communal connection of flight and fancy.
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Date: 6/18/2016 12:15:00 PM
Nette, great write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/16/2016 5:06:00 PM
Reads like a winner in the contest..Way to go..You have got monorhyme down..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2016 4:33:00 PM
Cute! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/16/2016 10:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/16/2016 8:02:00 AM
Nette, such a cute and lovely monorhyme! Congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 6/15/2016 3:25:00 PM
This is so very sweet!! Hope it does very well in the contest.. :-) :-)
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Date: 6/15/2016 1:47:00 AM
Excellent monorhyme. Moves well. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:27:00 PM
Very cute one, Nette. I don't know how she will judge this contest. They are all so sweet like this one.
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Date: 6/14/2016 8:31:00 AM
- A great poem Nette - Children are children, for good and bad ..... - Good luck in contest - Happy day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2016 4:09:00 AM
A merry, merry poem so brilliantly done. I remember my childhood days! Touche!
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