Andrea Dietrich Poet Monorhyme

Kids and the Great Outdoors

Beautiful wildflowers on the hillside gleam.
Children pluck the flowers there, and nearby is a stream.
Its waters with little polliwogs now teem!
Kids are splashing after them. How glad they seem!

Yes, school has ended and their summer I deem
will be a happy one filled with frolic and ice cream!
May each child know the joy of sleeping neath a moon beam
with the great outdoors their own back yard as peacefully they dream.

May 25, 2018

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Susan Gentry May 27, 2018 at 10:31 AM Sounds amazing! Most kids these days are inside way too much. You make me want to come play too lol.

John Gondolf May 26, 2018 at 1:25 PM Wow, this is such a light uplifting poem, Andrea, I really enjoyed it. John

Ralph Sergi May 26, 2018 at 8:26 AM Hi Andrea: Looks like a winner! The poem clearly depicts children at play with nature surrouding them.

Caren Krutsinger May 26, 2018 at 7:14 AM I put this immediately to my FAVS list,Andrea. It could be a song, I would send it to Blake Shelton.

Joseph May May 26, 2018 at 6:58 AM Wonderful write Andrea.. hugs

Vijay Pandit May 26, 2018 at 5:51 AM Enjoyed reading your poem Andrea..you depicted the surroundings beautifully.

Jan Allison May 26, 2018 at 3:29 AM sweet imagery Andrea, good luck:-) hugs jan xx