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Kids and Rings and Funny Things

Eugene awoke and looked upon His Mirror in the morning Dawn He saw himself and stopped to yawn Then saw instead his friend Antoine. Well Antoine said ‘come in, come on I’ll whisk you with this Magic Wand Then we can journey to the Pond And sail astride the Silver Swan’. And once inside the Looking Glass Amazing conquests came to pass Before the midday hourglass Released its sands upon the grass. Well, first they sought and found the pond And hypnotized the Silver Swan To sail them to the edge beyond To Charles, the Froggy Vagabond. Well Charles was said to be ‘a King’ Whose Crown was hanging from a String While hopping with a golden Ring Just waiting for a Kiss in Spring. Now Antoine said he’d kiss ‘the King’, (Or better said ‘the Froggy Thing’) But Eu refused to do such thing Unless the Frog removed the Ring. The Ring transfixed poor Froggy’s Nose Instead of round his tiny Toes To keep away the Midnight Crows As far as anybody knows. When Froggy’s Nose was finally free There was a sudden kissing spree With Ant and Eu (and Swan made three) To fix the Froggy’s Destiny. The Rest is rather imprecise. As to the trio’s Sacrifice The facts alone should now suffice - The Pond and Froggy turned to ice. And Swan became a Toucan Bird, The strangest thing I ever heard, Instead of chirp she only purred And even then she sometimes slurred. Though Charles the Frog was mighty cold, Upon the Pond he stiffly strolled Behind the The Ring that slowly rolled In search of one more nose to hold. Well, Eu watched Antoine set the Pace When beating Toucan in the Race To seek and find a warmer Space In front of Mother’s Fireplace. So Antoine waved his charmed Baton And whisked Eu back to Mum’s Salon - But looking back, Eu’s friend was yon Behind the silvered Amazon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/31/2016 4:07:00 PM
Terry, I really enjoyed reading your poem! This is so creative and entertaining and has an excellent rhyme and flow to it. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/20/2016 12:54:00 PM
Wow.....this was such a wonderful tale....you put so much into this delightful poem !! Congratulations on your big win, Terry !! Well deserved !
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Date: 5/20/2016 11:01:00 AM
Hi Terry...usually I don't go for long poems, but this one I truly enjoyed and even read it for a second time! You present a fresh and delightful story for both young and old. Well done on a merited win...congratulations! // paul
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Date: 5/20/2016 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/20/2016 9:32:00 AM
This is impressive and well titled. Congrats Terry on a well deserved win.
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:47:00 AM
Terry, your entry is so impressive and is my favorite. It is #1 in my book. Congratulations on your win! Ingenious!!! ; )
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:02:00 AM
You are a good story teller, I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:24:00 AM
Surreal....Enjoyed reading....
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Date: 2/11/2016 1:22:00 PM
Terry: You have suggested this was written for children. I guess I'm just a kid a heart. I enjoyed it. oldbuck
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:08:00 PM
Marvelous fantasy! A wonderful tale told with sustained mono rhyming and a delightful cadence. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/25/2015 6:17:00 PM
Terry, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:10:00 AM
- Glad I found this great story today, Terry :) - Thank you, I enjoy reading - I want to wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas - Enjoy with joy :) - Christmas hug// Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2015 6:27:00 PM
Hello, Terry, once again, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:24:00 PM
oooooooooooo you two for the price of one lol. No idea why it did that
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:23:00 PM
Quite an amazing tale you tell here Terry, surreal and psychedelic, you have wonderful imagination. Take care, Richard
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:13:00 PM
Quite an amazing tale you tell here Terry, surreal and psychedelic, you have wonderful imagination. Take care, Richard
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:24:00 PM
FABULOUS!!! Flawless cadence and superb mono-rhyming. The characters were a BLAST, and the images created were in technicolor they were so vibrant! BRAVO Terry! You have created a masterpiece! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:53:00 PM
Way to go, excellent write.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/23/2016 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, Pete!!
Date: 11/28/2015 1:14:00 PM
Outstanding! Marvelous rhyming quatrains and superb phrasing... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/23/2016 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Keith... you are very kind!!! Terry
Date: 11/20/2015 2:41:00 AM
Good luck in the contest... SKAT
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/23/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Skat!
Date: 11/7/2015 1:46:00 PM
great to see you on Soup again, Terry. This has the insight, humour and beautiful flow that I expect from you!
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/23/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Jack... much appreciated! I haven't been to 'active' lately...
Date: 11/4/2015 9:42:00 AM
Excuse me: I read SEVERAL of your poems. Thanks for your comment on MY dodoitsus. I'm still battling dementia (ha ha)
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/23/2016 6:04:00 AM
;-)
Date: 11/4/2015 9:39:00 AM
Hi Terry: I was definitely in awe of the lovely fairy tale rhyme that I read several of your poem to get a gist of your style. I wish you the best if its in the contest and thanks for your comment on mt dodoitsos.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/23/2016 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Ralph... you are very kind...
Date: 10/22/2015 6:16:00 PM
Terry, you are a wonderful storyteller, I really liked this tale, what an imagination 7 and thanks for visiting my Pantoum, For the Birds ~~
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 10/25/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings... I hope you don't really have broken wings... in any case your poems really fly... ;-))
Date: 10/12/2015 8:24:00 AM
Terry, this is quite an adventure. It is not exactly a happily ever after disney type outcome, but rather more of a dream like experience that I have read several times just to take it all in. Thanks.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 10/25/2015 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Duke! It's supposed to be for children... but not Disneyish...

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