Kids and Rings and Funny Things

Eugene awoke and looked upon
His Mirror in the morning Dawn
He saw himself and stopped to yawn
Then saw instead his friend Antoine.

Well Antoine said ‘come in, come on
I’ll whisk you with this Magic Wand
Then we can journey to the Pond
And sail astride the Silver Swan’.

And once inside the Looking Glass
Amazing conquests came to pass
Before the midday hourglass
Released its sands upon the grass.

Well, first they sought and found the pond
And hypnotized the Silver Swan
To sail them to the edge beyond
To Charles, the Froggy Vagabond.

Well Charles was said to be ‘a King’
Whose Crown was hanging from a String
While hopping with a golden Ring
Just waiting for a Kiss in Spring.

Now Antoine said he’d kiss ‘the King’,
(Or better said ‘the Froggy Thing’)
But Eu refused to do such thing
Unless the Frog removed the Ring.

The Ring transfixed poor Froggy’s Nose
Instead of round his tiny Toes
To keep away the Midnight Crows
As far as anybody knows.

When Froggy’s Nose was finally free
There was a sudden kissing spree
With Ant and Eu (and Swan made three)
To fix the Froggy’s Destiny.

The Rest is rather imprecise.
As to the trio’s Sacrifice
The facts alone should now suffice -
The Pond and Froggy turned to ice.

And Swan became a Toucan Bird,
The strangest thing I ever heard,
Instead of chirp she only purred
And even then she sometimes slurred.

Though Charles the Frog was mighty cold,
Upon the Pond he stiffly strolled
Behind the The Ring that slowly rolled
In search of one more nose to hold.

Well, Eu watched Antoine set the Pace
When beating Toucan in the Race 
To seek and find a warmer Space
In front of Mother’s Fireplace.

So Antoine waved his charmed Baton
And whisked Eu back to Mum’s Salon -
But looking back, Eu’s friend was yon
Behind the silvered Amazon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Terry, I really enjoyed reading your poem! This is so creative and entertaining and has an excellent rhyme and flow to it. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Richards Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Wow.....this was such a wonderful tale....you put so much into this delightful poem !! Congratulations on your big win, Terry !! Well deserved !
Callus Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Hi Terry...usually I don't go for long poems, but this one I truly enjoyed and even read it for a second time! You present a fresh and delightful story for both young and old. Well done on a merited win...congratulations! // paul
Devnath  Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Carmack Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 9:32 AM
This is impressive and well titled. Congrats Terry on a well deserved win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Terry, your entry is so impressive and is my favorite. It is #1 in my book. Congratulations on your win! Ingenious!!! ; )
Lamoureux Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 11:02 AM
You are a good story teller, I enjoyed this very much.
Gupta Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Surreal....Enjoyed reading....
Buck Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Terry: You have suggested this was written for children. I guess I'm just a kid a heart. I enjoyed it. oldbuck
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Marvelous fantasy! A wonderful tale told with sustained mono rhyming and a delightful cadence. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith
A   Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 6:17 PM
Terry, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:10 AM
- Glad I found this great story today, Terry :) - Thank you, I enjoy reading - I want to wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas - Enjoy with joy :) - Christmas hug// Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:27 PM
Hello, Terry, once again, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Seal Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 7:24 PM
oooooooooooo you two for the price of one lol. No idea why it did that
Seal Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Quite an amazing tale you tell here Terry, surreal and psychedelic, you have wonderful imagination. Take care, Richard
Seal Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Quite an amazing tale you tell here Terry, surreal and psychedelic, you have wonderful imagination. Take care, Richard
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:24 PM
FABULOUS!!! Flawless cadence and superb mono-rhyming. The characters were a BLAST, and the images created were in technicolor they were so vibrant! BRAVO Terry! You have created a masterpiece! Best wishes, Keith
Yuhas Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Way to go, excellent write.
O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Pete!!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 1:14 PM
Outstanding! Marvelous rhyming quatrains and superb phrasing... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:19 AM
Thank you, Keith... you are very kind!!! Terry
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 2:41 AM
Good luck in the contest... SKAT
O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Thank you, Skat!
Horne Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:46 PM
great to see you on Soup again, Terry. This has the insight, humour and beautiful flow that I expect from you!
O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Jack... much appreciated! I haven't been to 'active' lately...
Sergi Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Excuse me: I read SEVERAL of your poems. Thanks for your comment on MY dodoitsus. I'm still battling dementia (ha ha)
O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:04 AM
;-)
Sergi Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Hi Terry: I was definitely in awe of the lovely fairy tale rhyme that I read several of your poem to get a gist of your style. I wish you the best if its in the contest and thanks for your comment on mt dodoitsos.
O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 5:55 AM
Thank you, Ralph... you are very kind...
La France Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Terry, you are a wonderful storyteller, I really liked this tale, what an imagination 7 and thanks for visiting my Pantoum, For the Birds ~~
O'Leary Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings... I hope you don't really have broken wings... in any case your poems really fly... ;-))
Beaufort Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Terry, this is quite an adventure. It is not exactly a happily ever after disney type outcome, but rather more of a dream like experience that I have read several times just to take it all in. Thanks.
O'Leary Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Duke! It's supposed to be for children... but not Disneyish...
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