Kids

I watch them play
It is sweet this way
They laugh and smile
And see the great part of life for a while
They love to pick on each other
Well until they deal with thier mother
It is a sweet thing to witness
and just wait for the goodnight kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2009 at 6:53 PM
My dear Zach, such a lovely poem of fatherhood. :) Regarding 'faves' my friend, don't stress that nor should you value your poetry or your talents on it. I believe this community doesn't value a poet or their writing by 'faves' so much but more by the time they give in comments to let you know you are appreciated and being read. Relax and enjoy yourself :)
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May 26, 2009 at 2:26 PM
Daddy, you are hooked ... kids are the drugs of a loving heart ... nice write.
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May 26, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Zach. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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