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Kicks For Hicks

flirting with haiku but married to the senryu MagiCicada13

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2020 3:10:00 AM

Hilarious word play; made me day and POTD; what a way let me say to take us all hostage, by the way.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/14/2020 11:45:00 AM

Thank you my friend! xomo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2020 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your Poem of the Day win. Few words with much said. Enjoy your day and win........

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/12/2020 10:38:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Maureen ... (though I wonder if we should celebrating the cheating lifestyle ... lol). To be honest, I never check the POTDs or POTWs, and only ever find out about it if someone comments saying "congrats". ALSO ... Dave's Killer Good Seed is the best bread on the planet (that and sourdough).

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/12/2020 11:32:00 AM

oops, & Thank You!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/12/2020 11:20:00 AM

Ha ha! I forget to too and am similarly surprised. Dunno about the best... A beloved bakery in town shut its doors after near 100 years, there was such an outcry that a major chain was granted the name and recipes to carry them. The best Rye. And Challah to die for. ;), xomo!

Maria Williams

Date: 5/11/2020 6:53:00 AM

There is a satiric humorous twist to this, which I really love. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD Maureen....Maria Hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/11/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! I love doing the satiric humorous twist ;), Have a wonderful day ~ xomo!

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/10/2020 10:18:00 PM

nice twist love it

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/11/2020 12:23:00 AM

Thank you Timothy! xomo :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2020 8:58:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Tr'x are for k'cks too, you know! Ha, ha! Perfect! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 9:08:00 PM

It's the second the I've received the honour just cracking a joke, maybe I should set my sights on stand up... if you promise you will laugh like that in person ;), xomo <3

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/10/2020 6:51:00 PM

Of course!! : ) That's the way it works sometimes. Words flirt with the haiku, but are really dedicated to the senryu. Way to go Maureen! Congratulations on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 8:55:00 PM

Thank you Brandy! All I was doing was flirting with words, trying to get some giggles out there~ et voila! ;), xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/10/2020 6:29:00 PM

Ha ha, a cute and clever one! Congratulations on POTD!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 8:59:00 PM

Thank you Tania! I think I may be funnier than I think ;), Hugs! xomo

Sandra Adams

Date: 5/10/2020 6:25:00 PM

lol...brilliant... congrats on POTD hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 9:01:00 PM

Thank you Sandra! <3 xomo!

Gideon Idudje

Date: 5/10/2020 2:52:00 PM

Congrat Bravo On POTD

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Gideon! Warm poetry hugs, xomo!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2020 2:49:00 PM

I just knew that was you! I Loved it! Congratulations on POTD! Belated Mother's Day...it is ours here today. xxoo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 2:52:00 PM

Giggles! Thank you Connie <3 I'm in Canada, it's Mother's Day here, but I'm no mama ;), HUGS and Happy Mother's Day to you! xomo

John Watt

Date: 5/10/2020 1:57:00 PM

Mo, I spend more time with people than with nature, so senryu just come more naturally. Fun to see people's puzzled looks when you tell them you've written a senryu; seems only poets have ever heard of them! Congrats on your POTD today ~ John

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 2:10:00 PM

I hear ya there John, I had not heard of them before joining Soup, and would not profess to being anything near a master. Thank you! xomo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/10/2020 1:47:00 PM

Oh how cute Maureen, congratulations on POTD. be safe, Jennifer.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, ditto you too, xomo

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/10/2020 11:27:00 AM

Cute and clever. Congrats on POTD.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Rob, xomo!

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2020 11:18:00 AM

Congrats on POTD Mo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Joseph, xomo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/10/2020 10:59:00 AM

Very, very clever my friend - a poet's naughty flirtation. Does sedoka know about this affair! Congratulations on your POTD!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 12:12:00 PM

Oh! I haven't met Sedoka... ;), Thank you Sam! xomo

Mark Toney

Date: 5/10/2020 10:13:00 AM

Funtastic, Mo, before you know, you'll be huggin' a Haibun ;) Congratulations on Poem of the Day!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 10:18:00 AM

Oh you make me giggle so! Thank you Mark :))) xomo

Silent One

Date: 5/10/2020 9:57:00 AM

Congrats on POTD..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 10:05:00 AM

Hi you, thank you ~x (tried to read you today, my brain just can't do Pantoum)

Constance La France

Date: 5/10/2020 9:49:00 AM

Maureen, I like both but there is something about Senryu with the ability to use human emotions. Congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 10:09:00 AM

Thank you Constance. Me too. Have a lovely day. Btw, the Rideau by Stathcona/Kingsview Parks has been swarming with swallows, numbers greater than seen in years. Have a lovely day, xomo

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/10/2020 6:41:00 AM

POTD!!!!!!!!! Way to go sweet Mo... you is da bomb! Happy Jack XOXOX

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/10/2020 8:04:00 AM

I promise to show up more often sweet love!!! Kissie, kissie, XOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/10/2020 7:28:00 AM

I love it when you show up on my page babe. This was just a little tickle I thought others might enjoy; apparently so! Mother's Day a sad day for me, a humbling pick me up this is. The squishiest hugs for you my dear friend. xomo <3