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Over 14,000 lives were taken because of heroin related causes in 2023, just in the United States. Sadly, two of my friends lost their children from it. This poem is not about me, but about someone trying to battle it, and trying to keep Mr. Aich out of his system, for ever. The stuff that's on the streets now has to be much worse more now than it ever was. Dowsed with fetanyl and other unknown chemicals is a scary thought. 

As I walked along that lonely road Before the sun lay red Change, was on my mind Dealing with the devil, too damn long Endless nights have bled my veins with sour milk For I have been awakened- by will God perhaps, maybe- maybe not Heel to him and he will heal you, so they say I must prove to myself first- that I am, for real Just because actions speak louder than lips Knocking on heaven's door cracked my knuckles Looking for life with sewn eyelids Maybe, my world is nothing but a dream No one really knows me, Other than myself, or, do I Poor judgement was my shield Quarreling with myself, I was sure to lose Reaching out to hope, gave me hope Searching for that slim escape passage Time had come, no more "Mr. Bad Guy" Under my want, and desperate need Vowing to believe...again Wanting to believe...again X'ing out any thoughts, desires, and temptations Yearning for life...again Zeroing out- Mr. Aich

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Date: 12/16/2023 11:14:00 AM
Great awareness raised in your poem Charlie.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 12/12/2023 6:04:00 PM
Excellent Abecedarian poem, my friend, and a message that may encourage someone out there or in here to fight for their life. Thanks for caring and sharing, Charlie. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 12/8/2023 5:25:00 PM
Powerful abcedarian on addiction and the battles and struggles of individuals going through that. Here too we have so many cases like this and i think instead of punishment they need help and assistance professionally , maybe rehab which most cant even afford, i love the opening line in this. Was captivating and also so many other brilliant lines, which just depicts the evilness of this condition,and helplessness so well delivered especially through ending. Loved this, goodluck for the contest
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Date: 12/8/2023 6:45:00 PM
It's a crying shame, Ink. Statistics show that almost 1300 cases were calculated in UK in 2023. I am mind-boggled and utterly in the dark. Why? But I totally agree, professional assistance may be the answer..to some. Thank you for your thoughts on this, and for your ongoing support. Hugs Charlie
Date: 12/8/2023 3:28:00 PM
powerful message in your masterful Abecedarian. How creative of you...best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 12/8/2023 6:50:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for you showing me support and for the good-luck wishes, so much appreciated. For the life of me, I can't imagine how down life could be for some individuals, especially those who are dealing with these situations. :(

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