Kick the Can Hard-Bucket List

I’ve kicked the damn bucket
                                         turned it upside down
pieces of a lae fell out, yards of fabric
hand-woven bright

The spill was tremendous
out came tinksa’s
         prayer flags
singing bowls
and melted glass 
from Pele

Kneeling in the snow
    of winter, in I peer
the bottom is not insight,
wetness shimmers and seas call
       oil films
on Northern lights

Before me, before my time
my Grandad played kick-the-can
           damn good idea
as toe meets bucket, I howl
perhaps, I will go see
a polar bear!

No regrets fill my bucket
for I want mine full of colored bits of Lhasa
windchimes from Bhutan

Dented, by life marked, decorated
hell morphed, I intend to rise
on comet tails
    look for me
in ashes       on a wind
in the H i m a l ayas


Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 22, 2013 at 4:10 PM
Debbie, Congratulations in the "Bucket list" contest. always~ Linda
Hunter Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Wow...so cool, Debbie. Congrads!
Jones Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 7:23 PM
Much congrats Debbie....great win..Donna
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Excellent free verse, Debs. I just noticed a congrats on both your poem and mine, so it means the contest must just be judged.I better go see how we did!! Congrats!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 2:44 PM
Reads like an interesting bucket list..Good luck in the contest if an entry..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Ferry Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Sounds like you have had an interesting journey...Wind in the Himalayas,,great spot to glide...rick
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