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Key Lock To My Broken Heart

My heart is locked
with so much pain
black tear drops
fall from my face
every tear drop 
leaves a puddle
with a memory
that's hiding from space
stocked away
behind my soul
shattered to pieces
with no where to go
locked away
to never get out
to see the good side
of my broken heart

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Daniel Turner

November 2, 2016 at 11:40 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup web page, Tori. It seems someone below has accused you of stealing. hopefully you can get that worked out.

Patricia C.

November 1, 2016 at 2:00 AM

This not your poem am sorry I wrote that in 2011 this not your poem you have no rights too say you wrote this this is the original owner of poem.

Stephen Pennell

October 30, 2016 at 12:35 PM

shows real emotion look forward to reading more stephen

Poet Destroyer A

October 27, 2016 at 10:42 AM

Tori B, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tori Brock

October 27, 2016 at 11:38 AM

Thank you so much! One of my friends recommended poetry soup to me. I thought I would give it a try and I am already in love with it. Also thank you for reading my poems, and I think your poems are amazing. Thank you again - Tori B