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Kettle, Pond, Lake

Kettle, Pond and Lake - HAIKU SERIES kettle... a whistled cuppa... tainted water pond... a garden feature... frog croaking... lake... inland sea... fish cavorting...

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/9/2018 5:21:00 PM

short sweet and too the point Mick,your lines have a haiku feel to them - i enjoyed the imagery:-) hugs jan xx

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 6:20:00 AM

Haha you have a keen eye, I might be changing the entry, working on it, hugs Mick

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2018 3:42:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work. Contest entry reads like a good contender. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 6:21:00 AM

Thanks Sara, on both counts... :-) Mick