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Keepsake Held Close

twin oval azure pools reflect visage memento of lovers' tryst precious bundle gurgles ---------------------------------------------- 1st April 2017 My first Kimo... written for the "Form K - Kimo" contest sponsored by Broken Wings. (Third Place)

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/9/2017 8:57:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win, John:)

John Michaels
Date: 4/9/2017 11:42:00 AM

Thanks very much for your comments, Jo. Regards, John.

Roy Pett

Date: 4/9/2017 4:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win John, Roy. :))

John Michaels
Date: 4/9/2017 7:02:00 AM

Much appreciated, Roy! Thanks for your kind comments.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 11:04:00 AM

You have done really well for a first attempt at this form, John! Enjoyed this poem and the bundle of joy! Congratulations on your win. // paul

John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:54:00 AM

Thanks very much, Paul. I write a lot of Haiku so that gave me a bit of a headstart to the Kimo form, but was interesting to break the 5-7-5 mentality!! :) Thanks for stopping by!