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Keepsake Held Close

twin oval azure pools reflect visage
memento of lovers' tryst
precious bundle gurgles

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1st April 2017

My first Kimo... written for the "Form K - Kimo" contest sponsored by Broken Wings.
(Third Place)

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Joanna Daniel Date: 4/9/2017 8:57:00 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win, John:) Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/9/2017 11:42:00 AM Thanks very much for your comments, Jo. Regards, John.

Roy Pett Date: 4/9/2017 4:07:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win John, Roy. :)) Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/9/2017 7:02:00 AM Much appreciated, Roy! Thanks for your kind comments.

Paul Callus Date: 4/7/2017 11:04:00 AM You have done really well for a first attempt at this form, John! Enjoyed this poem and the bundle of joy! Congratulations on your win. // paul Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:54:00 AM Thanks very much, Paul. I write a lot of Haiku so that gave me a bit of a headstart to the Kimo form, but was interesting to break the 5-7-5 mentality!! :) Thanks for stopping by!

Joseph May Date: 4/7/2017 8:47:00 AM Congrats on a fine win John Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:53:00 AM Thanks, Joseph. Much appreciated!

Constance La France Date: 4/7/2017 8:42:00 AM John congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice Kimo . I really like it. Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:49:00 AM Thanks for running the contest and for awarding me a win!! Glad you enjoyed my little poem!

Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/7/2017 7:45:00 AM Amazingly crafted imagery!!! Congrats John, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-) Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:46:00 AM That's very kind of you to say so! Many thanks for your comments.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/6/2017 9:57:00 PM I do remember this one. BIG congrats on a great win. Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:40:00 AM And to you, too! Thanks for your kind comments.

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/4/2017 10:27:00 AM Awesome, John:) a 7:) Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:37:00 AM Hi Jo! Thanks for your kind comments - glad you liked it!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/3/2017 3:11:00 PM how beautiful to describe the newborn. Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:37:00 AM Thanks, Andrea! Support always appreciated!