John Michaels Poet Kimo

Keepsake Held Close

twin oval azure pools reflect visage
memento of lovers' tryst
precious bundle gurgles

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1st April 2017

My first Kimo... written for the "Form K - Kimo" contest sponsored by Broken Wings.
(Third Place)

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Joanna Daniel April 9, 2017 at 8:57 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win, John:) John Michaels April 9, 2017 at 11:42 AM Thanks very much for your comments, Jo. Regards, John.

Roy Pett April 9, 2017 at 4:07 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win John, Roy. :)) John Michaels April 9, 2017 at 7:02 AM Much appreciated, Roy! Thanks for your kind comments.

Paul Callus April 7, 2017 at 11:04 AM You have done really well for a first attempt at this form, John! Enjoyed this poem and the bundle of joy! Congratulations on your win. // paul John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:54 AM Thanks very much, Paul. I write a lot of Haiku so that gave me a bit of a headstart to the Kimo form, but was interesting to break the 5-7-5 mentality!! :) Thanks for stopping by!

Joseph May April 7, 2017 at 8:47 AM Congrats on a fine win John John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:53 AM Thanks, Joseph. Much appreciated!

Constance La France April 7, 2017 at 8:42 AM John congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice Kimo . I really like it. John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:49 AM Thanks for running the contest and for awarding me a win!! Glad you enjoyed my little poem!

Teddy Kimathi April 7, 2017 at 7:45 AM Amazingly crafted imagery!!! Congrats John, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-) John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:46 AM That's very kind of you to say so! Many thanks for your comments.

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2017 at 9:57 PM I do remember this one. BIG congrats on a great win. John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:40 AM And to you, too! Thanks for your kind comments.

Joanna Daniel April 4, 2017 at 10:27 AM Awesome, John:) a 7:) John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:37 AM Hi Jo! Thanks for your kind comments - glad you liked it!

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2017 at 3:11 PM how beautiful to describe the newborn. John Michaels April 8, 2017 at 4:37 AM Thanks, Andrea! Support always appreciated!