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twin oval azure pools reflect visage memento of lovers' tryst precious bundle gurgles ---------------------------------------------- 1st April 2017 My first Kimo... written for the "Form K - Kimo" contest sponsored by Broken Wings. (Third Place)

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Date: 4/9/2017 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, John:)
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John Michaels
Date: 4/9/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thanks very much for your comments, Jo. Regards, John.
Date: 4/9/2017 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win John, Roy. :))
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John Michaels
Date: 4/9/2017 7:02:00 AM
Much appreciated, Roy! Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 4/7/2017 11:04:00 AM
You have done really well for a first attempt at this form, John! Enjoyed this poem and the bundle of joy! Congratulations on your win. // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:54:00 AM
Thanks very much, Paul. I write a lot of Haiku so that gave me a bit of a headstart to the Kimo form, but was interesting to break the 5-7-5 mentality!! :) Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 4/7/2017 8:47:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win John
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:53:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. Much appreciated!
Date: 4/7/2017 8:42:00 AM
John congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice Kimo . I really like it.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:49:00 AM
Thanks for running the contest and for awarding me a win!! Glad you enjoyed my little poem!
Date: 4/7/2017 7:45:00 AM
Amazingly crafted imagery!!! Congrats John, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:46:00 AM
That's very kind of you to say so! Many thanks for your comments.
Date: 4/6/2017 9:57:00 PM
I do remember this one. BIG congrats on a great win.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:40:00 AM
And to you, too! Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 4/4/2017 10:27:00 AM
Awesome, John:) a 7:)
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:37:00 AM
Hi Jo! Thanks for your kind comments - glad you liked it!
Date: 4/3/2017 3:11:00 PM
how beautiful to describe the newborn.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 4:37:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea! Support always appreciated!