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Keepsake - Fluttering Memories

She stepped into the beautiful spring day
 Wearing the brooch  her grandma 
 gave her,  a butterfly ~

 4/4/17
 Contest: Form K - Kimo
 Sponsor: Broken Wings

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2017

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Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2017 at 7:42 AM

I'm glad I read this one a thoughtful piece.

April 7, 2017 at 11:34 AM

Clever matching of spring and butterfly, Joseph! Your keepsake has served you well....congratulations on placing first! // paul

April 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM

Thank you Paul

April 7, 2017 at 10:43 AM

Well done Joseph, congratulations...

April 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM

Thank you Charlie

Sara Chansarkar

April 7, 2017 at 9:30 AM

Lovely Joseph,congrats!

April 7, 2017 at 7:47 PM

Thank you Sara

Constance La France

April 7, 2017 at 8:26 AM

Joseph congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful Kimo. I love it.

April 7, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Thank you so much for my top placement BW

April 7, 2017 at 7:14 AM

Splendid work!!! Congrats Joseph, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-)

April 7, 2017 at 8:41 AM

Thank you Teddy

April 7, 2017 at 2:07 AM

A great piece, Joseph. Congratulations on your first place win!

April 7, 2017 at 8:41 AM

Thank you John

April 6, 2017 at 11:20 PM

I love where you took the theme! Congrats! Janice

April 7, 2017 at 8:40 AM

Thank you Janice

Andrea Dietrich

April 6, 2017 at 9:50 PM

This is precious, Joseph. I love it!

April 7, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Thank you Andrea

April 5, 2017 at 10:11 AM

Lovely kimo about a beautiful keepsake, Joseph:) should do well:)

April 5, 2017 at 12:40 PM

Thank you Jo

April 5, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Lovely Kimo ... Nice keepsake ...

April 5, 2017 at 12:39 PM

Thank you Probir

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