Keepsake

Sacred to my heart, An immemorial love: Relic of my soul.

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James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2010 8:00:00 AM

Another beautiful gem Raul, if i get to be a fraction of what you write in a few words, i shall be quite content >> James

Marcus Crane

Date: 2/3/2010 4:53:00 PM

beautiful piece :) .. i'm finding my way in the world of poetry again .. i really enjoyed this one :) . Marco

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/25/2010 7:03:00 PM

this is gigantically beautiful,Magnificent,going to my favz..Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 1/21/2010 6:49:00 PM

This is very beautiful...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2010 6:40:00 PM

Beautifully romantic elegance in your words... your title is superb Raul.. enjoyed this creative write from u... blessings...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/18/2010 10:25:00 AM

Stunning and beautiful...as is your soul, Raul. You bring beauty to the Soup. ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2010 9:21:00 AM

You are a genius with the 5,7,5..... Good job my friend.....:JP]

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2010 8:58:00 AM

Very nicely stated, Raul! I do love reading senryu! thanks for your comment. Andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 1/18/2010 8:18:00 AM

Your last line says it all Raul. Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/18/2010 4:48:00 AM

Liked this reflective piece thanks Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2010 4:36:00 AM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned here. Not really sure of the interpertation. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my Haiku. Sara