Keepsake

Sacred to my heart,
An immemorial love:
Relic of my soul.

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James Fraser

February 5, 2010 at 8:00 AM

Another beautiful gem Raul, if i get to be a fraction of what you write in a few words, i shall be quite content >> James

Marcus Crane

February 3, 2010 at 4:53 PM

beautiful piece :) .. i'm finding my way in the world of poetry again .. i really enjoyed this one :) . Marco

Charmaine Chircop

January 25, 2010 at 7:03 PM

this is gigantically beautiful,Magnificent,going to my favz..Charma

Marty Owens

January 21, 2010 at 6:49 PM

This is very beautiful...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 18, 2010 at 6:40 PM

Beautifully romantic elegance in your words... your title is superb Raul.. enjoyed this creative write from u... blessings...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

January 18, 2010 at 10:25 AM

Stunning and beautiful...as is your soul, Raul. You bring beauty to the Soup. ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett

January 18, 2010 at 9:21 AM

You are a genius with the 5,7,5..... Good job my friend.....:JP]

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2010 at 8:58 AM

Very nicely stated, Raul! I do love reading senryu! thanks for your comment. Andrea

Brian Strand

January 18, 2010 at 8:18 AM

Your last line says it all Raul. Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.

Daniel Cheeseman

January 18, 2010 at 4:48 AM

Liked this reflective piece thanks Daniel

Sara Kendrick

January 18, 2010 at 4:36 AM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned here. Not really sure of the interpertation. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my Haiku. Sara

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