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Keeping Watch

Gray clouds hanging low
Brilliant light peeping through
Making sure all’s well

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/1/2013 10:21:00 AM

a lovely haiku here, my friend

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/3/2010 7:43:00 PM

Short and sweet.very good.hope you are well.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/28/2010 8:44:00 AM

Seems like the skies in my part of the world tonight :) totally enjoyed this one, Audrey :)

Shirin Neshat

Date: 1/25/2010 3:31:00 AM

Gray coulds make me sad, but I like the way you wrote it.

Monte Banner

Date: 1/24/2010 6:41:00 PM

This makes me feel safe...and secure. But unhappy. As if i knew i were playing along to this game called life. I like you. You have soul. One of the first ive seen on here.

Richard Craig

Date: 1/24/2010 4:59:00 PM

Thank you Audrey for your comments and just know poetry is an outlet for me to get out feelings I normally would supress.... I'm ok just processing life often...thank you so much for your care and concern!!!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 2:50:00 PM

HOpe wins out. Good one, Audrey!

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2010 2:37:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Audrey >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2010 10:38:00 AM

Love the hidden meaning in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments. Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/21/2010 8:01:00 AM

this is just inspiring :) loved the image that "brilliant light peeping through" evokes :)

Lena Townsend

Date: 1/21/2010 7:20:00 AM

Excellent write friend, keep them coming! Smiles from Lolita

James Peranteau

Date: 1/21/2010 12:47:00 AM

To me an awesome poem is one that speaks volumes in little words,...like the look of love,...no words there yet much is said ! Awesome write Audrey ! james

Brian Strand

Date: 1/20/2010 11:58:00 PM

We get the picture Audrey lovely imagery.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/20/2010 8:21:00 PM

I like the vision and the outook in this well written Haiku, Audrey! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2010 3:34:00 PM

I love Haiku as we can say so much in a few words. And we still have lots of room left on the paper to write more. Excellent Haiku Audrey. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 1/20/2010 2:42:00 PM

This is beautiful Audrey...Love it...Marty

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