Keeping Silence in the Depths

The learned, swirling with thoughts
of a blossom in each mer-girl’s hair,
those burbling kids have no synthetic wear,
no vision of things on soil, but of the sea

the torrential terror of bigger fish, the illusion
is their prettiness. Whispers emanate
their fear of sharks, whales and humankind.
They keep their silence in the depths.

Some fool mermaids and sirens let themselves
be known. Now what lies are made up, keep
the intelligent far below the surface. Rustic
lands only one knew…she fell in love.

Well, isn’t that grand. Now timeless the tricks,
the snares of those who breathe and die
in the seas, yet who have dared the apparatus
to search for what they must not capture.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 4:42 PM
This enchanted my mind. You did such a good job capturing the allure of sea and siren...mixed feelings.... just beautiful, and you used the words for the contest, too- good luck! <3 xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Paige! It was the very last entry.
May Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Crandall Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 11:23 PM
I like "of a blossom in each mer-girl’s hair, those burbling kids have no synthetic wear"
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, David!
mysore Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:27 PM
you did good by equating humans with sharks. I agree. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Thanks! Happy writing to you too!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again.  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 10:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love the timeless sea. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.....................
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Thank you!
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