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Keeping Silence in the Depths

The learned, swirling with thoughts of a blossom in each mer-girl’s hair, those burbling kids have no synthetic wear, no vision of things on soil, but of the sea the torrential terror of bigger fish, the illusion is their prettiness. Whispers emanate their fear of sharks, whales and humankind. They keep their silence in the depths. Some fool mermaids and sirens let themselves be known. Now what lies are made up, keep the intelligent far below the surface. Rustic lands only one knew…she fell in love. Well, isn’t that grand. Now timeless the tricks, the snares of those who breathe and die in the seas, yet who have dared the apparatus to search for what they must not capture.

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Date: 7/29/2024 4:42:00 PM
This enchanted my mind. You did such a good job capturing the allure of sea and siren...mixed feelings.... just beautiful, and you used the words for the contest, too- good luck! <3 xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! It was the very last entry.
Date: 7/28/2024 5:11:00 AM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 7/27/2024 11:23:00 PM
I like "of a blossom in each mer-girl’s hair, those burbling kids have no synthetic wear"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, David!
Date: 7/27/2024 8:27:00 PM
you did good by equating humans with sharks. I agree. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2024 8:40:00 PM
Thanks! Happy writing to you too!
Date: 7/27/2024 9:27:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again.  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/26/2024 10:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love the timeless sea. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 11:24:00 AM
Thank you!

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