Premiere Contest WinnerKeeping God-search simple

—The Blade of Grass— I sought no empyrean throne beyond the wheeling blue, But found one adamantine dewdrop trembling in the grass. It did not scintillate. It beheld me. Then every pinion became articulate flame; The raven's augury, the blackbird's argent hymn, Were borne upon one unoriginate Breath I could not name. I watched the lion heave the primordial wind, The lamb receive its inviolate ordinance. Neither litigated Eternity. Rain descended remembering firmament. The brook relinquished its mountain, Yet bore its genesis. Then desolation entered. No seraph sundered the stillness. One mortal hand entered mine. Its benignity outshone The constellated treasury of heaven. That night the firmament exhaled one eternal Breath. The stars did not descend. The earth ascended. The adamantine dewdrop withdrew from the blade of grass. Since then— Wherever aught lives— Or abides— I have never again encountered a universe bereft of God.
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Sultan Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 1:20 AM
Congratulations.And your poetry is deep with good poetic observation.well done and dua from my side.
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July 14, 2026 at 3:50 AM
Dear Nazia, thank you for your generous words, and even more for your *dua*. There is a quiet grace in knowing the poem found a home in your heart. I shall remember your kindness with gratitude.
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July 13, 2026 at 2:58 PM
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July 14, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Dear Pascal, your reading heartened me deeply. If the poem carries any beauty, it is because it gestures toward a truth far greater than itself. Thank you for receiving it with such generosity.
Borg Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 3:01 PM
The beauty of your poem reveals the true belief you hold in Him. Up-lifting!
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July 11, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Congrats. Way to go. Sara K.
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July 11, 2026 at 8:38 PM
Thine words are a reflection of blessings, ma'am. I thank thee.
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July 11, 2026 at 2:48 AM
Such a wonderful poem consistently emphasizes the presence of God or a divine force in the world, from the dewdrop to the stars. ** Adamantine Dewdrop**: Represents the unexpected source of profound insight and connection to the divine. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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July 11, 2026 at 3:44 AM
My sincere thanks, Sotto. It quietly moves me that you discerned the adamantine dewdrop, for such perception seems granted only to those whom grace has taught to see beyond appearances. Perhaps every poem awaits not merely a reader, but such a gaze. I am profoundly grateful for yours.
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July 10, 2026 at 9:43 PM
beautifully written, congrats on your win!
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July 10, 2026 at 10:07 PM
Thank you most sincerely, Karen. It is a rare encouragement to know the poem found a home beyond the page. Your generous words are deeply appreciated. May your own pen continue to discover such moments of quiet wonder.
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