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Now the top of my head’s pretty cool, but I need all of me in the pool on this blazing hot day. Then till dark I will play ‘cause tomorrow I start back to school.

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Date: 8/8/2024 2:46:00 AM
I could have done with that pool every day after school. Great rhyming. You’ve nailed the form. Cheers - Gary
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/8/2024 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gary! Janice
Date: 8/7/2024 4:03:00 AM
Lol, used to hate that after a break, school the next day. Good luck Janice. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2024 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom! Janice
Date: 8/6/2024 2:22:00 PM
lol Janice:-) hugs jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2024 5:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice

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