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Keeping a Cool Head




Now the top of my head’s pretty cool,
but I need all of me in the pool
   on this blazing hot day.
   Then till dark I will play
‘cause tomorrow I start back to school.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radice Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 2:46 AM
I could have done with that pool every day after school. Great rhyming. You’ve nailed the form. Cheers - Gary
Canerdy Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 4:10 PM
Thanks so much, Gary! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 4:03 AM
Lol, used to hate that after a break, school the next day. Good luck Janice. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Thanks so much, Tom! Janice
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 2:22 PM
lol Janice:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 5:43 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
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