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Keep Trying

Water washes over me pushing me further down. I keep trying to stay afloat afraid one day I'll drown. Someday life will get easier for us, I'm sure it will. Just now it feels like we are pushing dead weight up dead-man's hill. I love to know we're in it together till the end. No matter how much stress we have We'll always be best friends. My partner, lover, but mostly friend. You are my everything. When I am tired and can't stand up that's when you whisper in my ear... ...KEEP TRYING. Thank you for your strength.

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