Keep This To Yourself

tho our love is real
to some it no deal
they have a hate pill
so let this be still
take a chill pill
under your belt
KEEP THIS TO
YOUR SELF
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 7, 2013 at 3:22 AM
Kurtis, Your story has little life and is more like a statement than a poem, please proof read your material before posting it, and add more of a story and a punch line (Surprise) near the end, your poem will be more formidable and interesting and you will score a higher rating. all the best. John
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