Jill Spagnola Poet Haiku

Keep Searching

Keep Searching

                                     surrounded by ash
                                sun is blotted out no light
                                 split up north south west


					                                SunshineWilliams

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Thomas Martin February 17, 2016 at 11:49 AM Interesting haiku! You did successfully tell the story instead of telling about it. Jill Spagnola February 20, 2016 at 11:59 AM Thomas, this is one of most awesomest comments I have ever received on my work!!Grazi' :),jill

Wilfred Aniagyei February 8, 2016 at 1:35 AM Nice haiku, Jill! Jill Spagnola February 17, 2016 at 10:11 AM Thanks Wilfred :), jill

Arthur Vaso February 7, 2016 at 11:18 PM Great haiku, have you tried google? Kidding! :) Jill Spagnola February 17, 2016 at 10:11 AM Mr. Vaso LOL :), jill

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2016 at 3:46 PM It sounds like someone is so lost!! yes, keep searching is needful!! Jill Spagnola February 16, 2016 at 4:18 PM Not someone, perhaps something!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis February 4, 2016 at 11:08 AM Impressive, dear jill! Jill Spagnola February 4, 2016 at 3:19 PM Thank you for your awesome feedback my friend...peace & love, jill