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Keep Searching

Keep Searching surrounded by ash sun is blotted out no light split up north south west SunshineWilliams

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Thomas Martin

Date: 2/17/2016 11:49:00 AM

Interesting haiku! You did successfully tell the story instead of telling about it.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/20/2016 11:59:00 AM

Thomas, this is one of most awesomest comments I have ever received on my work!!Grazi' :),jill

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 2/8/2016 1:35:00 AM

Nice haiku, Jill!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/17/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Wilfred :), jill

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/7/2016 11:18:00 PM

Great haiku, have you tried google? Kidding! :)

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/17/2016 10:11:00 AM

Mr. Vaso LOL :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2016 3:46:00 PM

It sounds like someone is so lost!! yes, keep searching is needful!!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/16/2016 4:18:00 PM

Not someone, perhaps something!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/4/2016 11:08:00 AM

Impressive, dear jill!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/4/2016 3:19:00 PM

Thank you for your awesome feedback my friend...peace & love, jill