Keep Moving

On dry 
desolate sands,
your wet footprints
eagerly follow your star,

for you 
have nowhere 
to go if you continue 
staying where you are!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Hello Romeo Naces, I like this poem that I read. It makes a lot of sense. have a nice evening my friend.
Naces Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene!
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August 23, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene!
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