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17.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Put Your Best Sijo Forward Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

4 th place in the contest

- Keep It Wild And Cold -

                The cold winter suffocates the world with its icy breath
             dark petroleum horizon, trembling bodies - chattering teeth
           Sparkling snow crystals have yielded silver, nothing was spared
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Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner in the Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 7:42 PM
Gorgeous sijo with vivid and excellent words to descrbe an arctic region. I love and enjoyed this a lot. Congratulations on your win my dear poet friend Anne-Lise! Thanks for sharing! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:23 PM
I really liked your imagery in this one, Anne-Lise. Thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 12:53 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/great picture. Good Luck... Hugs... Have a wonderful day/stay warm.................
Gentile Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 4:00 AM
Anne-Lise, your seasonal Sijo is so beautifully bleak as it should be in its chilliness and stark imagery! Wonderful poem! Happy Friday xxoo
George Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 6:07 AM
"Sparkling snow crystals have yielded silver, nothing was spared" Beautiful line. A vivid description of the winter scene. Sorry, I couldn't respond earlier as I was traveling for a couple of days !
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:27 AM
Very descriptive work. I think it must be an icy wonderland. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Now I need some hot cocoa. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 2:49 AM
Incredibly the way you described the north pole Loved it. Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 2:52 AM
- Lofoten in Norway, Victor - My sister has lived there for many years ... (she loved the place) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:09 PM
BRRRRR, but oh so well written, :)
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 2:53 AM
- BRRRRRRR ... :))) - - Thanks for reading, Vie Rose :) - hugs
Beaufort Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 3:08 PM
It does seem that the cold and ice touches everything and even the sky gets involved. You put it all together. It's a powerful scene. How much colder can it get?
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 2:51 PM
Very nice descriptive Sijo!
McBride  Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 2:41 PM
What a beautiful picture and poem to enhance this so elegantly, love it, hugs
Greenhough Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 1:56 PM
An excellent poem. Good luck.
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Very descriptive of the bitter cold you must be having up there in the north. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Bauer Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:24 PM
very descriptive and beautifully expressed, anne-lise! good luck in the contest...
One Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Wonderful imagery and very very cold feeling!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:00 PM
- Yes cold, and there has been a lot of snow in the last 24 hours ... and there will be more ... minus 12 degrees this afternoon :) - Thanks for reading :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Nice winter landscape with vivid imagery. GL in the contest.
Kauffman Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Oh, Anne-Lise! This is visual perfection - "dark petroleum horizon," "chattering teeth, " "crystals have yielded silver!" And like your final image, you spared nothing with your creative freshness and so reflects your intimate knowledge of the many faces of winter! Such a powerful sijo! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings of health and happiness for 2024. Raising a cup of "glogg" to you! We make mulled wine at Christmas with spices. Cardamom is the secret ingredient!
Sharma  Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Oh wow this is such a powerful and deeply impactful sijo, dear Anne-Lise.. You've impeccably captured the melancholic essence of winter and how it shakes the soul with icy breaths, freezing many hearts.. I love how descriptively you've woven the imagery here.. Absolutely brilliant. Sending you light & best wishes ~
Poet Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Stunningly evocative, sijo, Anne-Lise. The imagery and flow of your word weaving, as well as the skill with which you conveyed it, is wonderful, good luck with the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Brings back memories of the fjords although not the amount of snow in your picture. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 10:08 AM
- This photo is from Lofoten in Norway, Tom :) - Thanks for reading :) - hugs
Koplin Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:39 AM
That looks like one cold day in the picture and your words.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:39 AM
This is such a descriptive sijo dear anne lise I absolutely love the flow and imagery of your word weaving and how well you’ve delivered it , your picture used here too goes so well with it! Especially love the opening how you’ve personified and the ending. Best wishes for the contest
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