Keep It Simple

breath of God
fills our form
why then pride

feel heartbeats 
allow bliss
to lead us

as God’s child
we’re as He
love and light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Eslinger Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:50 PM
Yes, here the pro-gress of our being is in poetry “sinplified,”&=too, the relationship of us with God termed in purity of communion (bliss) & actions for living (feeling His heartbeats in our actions of true love & light), to show out all life within. Thank you. The path tho notalways easy, you pen quite clear. Xox
Seeker Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Yes, earth life is harsh. We live in a decaying organic form, pain is inevitable, yet of totally prioritise God connect within, the sense of separation reduces, whereupon false identity recedes and our inner eternal light is revealed
Baker Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:38 PM
I like your poem and the wisdom it is filled with, Unseeking Seeker. Thanks for sharing it with us, my friend. Bill
Seeker Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Bill :)
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 4:04 AM
Simple may be, but a powerful message. Divine poetry, US.
Seeker Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Thank you, Vijay
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August 17, 2023 at 2:18 AM
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