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breath of God fills our form why then pride feel heartbeats allow bliss to lead us as God’s child we’re as He love and light

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Date: 8/17/2023 5:50:00 PM
Yes, here the pro-gress of our being is in poetry “sinplified,”&=too, the relationship of us with God termed in purity of communion (bliss) & actions for living (feeling His heartbeats in our actions of true love & light), to show out all life within. Thank you. The path tho notalways easy, you pen quite clear. Xox
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Date: 8/17/2023 5:59:00 PM
Yes, earth life is harsh. We live in a decaying organic form, pain is inevitable, yet of totally prioritise God connect within, the sense of separation reduces, whereupon false identity recedes and our inner eternal light is revealed
Date: 8/17/2023 5:38:00 PM
I like your poem and the wisdom it is filled with, Unseeking Seeker. Thanks for sharing it with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/17/2023 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Bill :)
Date: 8/17/2023 4:04:00 AM
Simple may be, but a powerful message. Divine poetry, US.
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Date: 8/17/2023 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay
Date: 8/17/2023 2:18:00 AM
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