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Keep An Eye On

Keep an eye on every charter Take heed of the bane of your life Lest you fall into danger Keep an eye on every charter Withhold from any impair Loose yourself from strife Keep an eye on every charter Take heed of the bane of your life 04/27/16

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Paul Mburu Watex

Date: 6/4/2016 11:59:00 AM

Nice piece...enjoyed it so.

Phumla Xuza Khanyile

Date: 5/12/2016 9:19:00 AM

Sweet and short, I like!

Funom Makama

Date: 5/5/2016 1:02:00 PM

This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

James Inman

Date: 5/3/2016 12:00:00 PM

If only it were so easy Moon Flower. Life sometimes sneaks up on you when you're looking in the other direction.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2016 5:13:00 PM

a nice little cautionary triolet!

Moon Flower
Date: 4/27/2016 2:39:00 AM

Thank you for the cute comment and for dropping by, Andrea. :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/26/2016 4:44:00 PM

very wise and well done ;)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/27/2016 2:38:00 AM

Thank you, Casarah. :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 4/26/2016 4:39:00 PM

The wisdom expressed in this should most definitely be heeded! I will think on this deeply! Very insightful Moon Flower, very! :-)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/27/2016 2:38:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Walter. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2016 3:32:00 PM

wise words indeed Moonflower:-)You will never know how much I can relate to this poem especially today:-( hugs Jan xx

Moon Flower
Date: 4/27/2016 2:36:00 AM

Much appreciated, Jan. Hugs. Cheers!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2016 2:43:00 PM

- Wise words, great written Moon Flower - hugs // Sun :)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/27/2016 2:34:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs. :)