Moon Flower Poet Triolet

Keep An Eye On

Keep an eye on every charter
Take heed of the bane of your life
Lest you fall into danger
Keep an eye on every charter

Withhold from any impair
Loose yourself from strife
Keep an eye on every charter
Take heed of the bane of your life


04/27/16

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Paul Mburu Watex June 4, 2016 at 11:59 AM Nice piece...enjoyed it so.

Phumla Xuza Khanyile May 12, 2016 at 9:19 AM Sweet and short, I like!

Funom Makama May 5, 2016 at 1:02 PM This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

James Inman May 3, 2016 at 12:00 PM If only it were so easy Moon Flower. Life sometimes sneaks up on you when you're looking in the other direction.

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2016 at 5:13 PM a nice little cautionary triolet! Moon Flower April 27, 2016 at 2:39 AM Thank you for the cute comment and for dropping by, Andrea. :)

Casarah Nance April 26, 2016 at 4:44 PM very wise and well done ;) Moon Flower April 27, 2016 at 2:38 AM Thank you, Casarah. :)

Walter T. Ashe April 26, 2016 at 4:39 PM The wisdom expressed in this should most definitely be heeded! I will think on this deeply! Very insightful Moon Flower, very! :-) Moon Flower April 27, 2016 at 2:38 AM Thanks for the kind words, Walter. :)

Jan Allison April 26, 2016 at 3:32 PM wise words indeed Moonflower:-)You will never know how much I can relate to this poem especially today:-( hugs Jan xx Moon Flower April 27, 2016 at 2:36 AM Much appreciated, Jan. Hugs. Cheers!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2016 at 2:43 PM - Wise words, great written Moon Flower - hugs // Sun :) Moon Flower April 27, 2016 at 2:34 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs. :)